Aw, it's no problem! Names get reused a lot round these parts :)
If you do change it into a story I think you can be a little more descriptive and give reasons behind why people do the things they do and why they are the way they are. It was a little vague, but it wasn't horrible, ya know?
I think it was cute, and I liked the relationship between the friends but there should just be a little more insight into it.
It was a really good job for your first one shot!
You should read some of my first stories...actually- you shouldn't. Hahahah, they were all fucking TERRIBLE. Like, beyond terrible to be honest. As cliche as it sounds, practice makes perfect. I'm sure what you wrote isnt' as bad as my first works, so I'm excited to read what you have!
Who's it about?
Aw, thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked Weathered. I liked writing it, so it makes me happy when I hear people liked to read it as well.
And I will most definitely read your one shot! Do you want to post it or do you want to send it to me through a message?