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  • PensRock

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    Thanks for the add. Stop by and chat sometime.
    April 15th, 2010 at 04:25am
  • loadedexcuses

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    Aw, it's no problem! Names get reused a lot round these parts :)
    If you do change it into a story I think you can be a little more descriptive and give reasons behind why people do the things they do and why they are the way they are. It was a little vague, but it wasn't horrible, ya know?
    I think it was cute, and I liked the relationship between the friends but there should just be a little more insight into it.
    It was a really good job for your first one shot!
    March 22nd, 2010 at 08:06pm
  • loadedexcuses

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    Just read and commented it! It was pretty darn cute.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 04:52am
  • loadedexcuses

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    Well I can't wait to read it! I love me some Pkane :)
    March 22nd, 2010 at 04:22am
  • loadedexcuses

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    You should read some of my first stories...actually- you shouldn't. Hahahah, they were all fucking TERRIBLE. Like, beyond terrible to be honest. As cliche as it sounds, practice makes perfect. I'm sure what you wrote isnt' as bad as my first works, so I'm excited to read what you have!
    Who's it about?
    March 22nd, 2010 at 03:22am
  • loadedexcuses

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    Aw, thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked Weathered. I liked writing it, so it makes me happy when I hear people liked to read it as well.
    And I will most definitely read your one shot! Do you want to post it or do you want to send it to me through a message?
    March 22nd, 2010 at 02:42am