Helena Fiego / Comments

that was a good chapter, funny.but i dont know dallas gives me the creeps.I knew something along the lines of kissing was going to happen.seriously gisselle is kinda clueless about him.but um i don want her to end up with zacky but i feel like somethings going to happen with brian ahaha.

Don't be jealous about me, you are very pretty yourself, especially your smile. It's so bright :}

I'm really glad that I made you feel happy, and people always say I'm very sweet, heh, but that's just the way my life goes :} Being nice never hurts anyone, sometimes me, but naah, I'll get over the dark times and so on :}

Ahh, I'll go read the update, I have waited so looong for it, okay a week, that's not long, but to me it was a very hard time. So good :}

by far, my absolute favourite story on any site.
i love, love, love you're writing.
I sit on pins and needles until the next chapter comes out lol
you're amazing!

no problem at all!
its an amazing story and it deserves to be pimped!
lol. all i want is a nother chapter as fast as humanly possible! xD

First of all, hello there, You crazy LONG chapter writing person *waves*

Second - Gosh, I don' t know where to start. *think, think*.
I have never, ever, EVER thought that there could be THIS amazingly good story about Mister Vengeance. I swear, this is one hell of a story. It's so real, so incredibly amazing, I can't even put my words together, I just stop.
I'm speechless, really.

Once I read your chapter ( and I read all your story in three days :D ), I lose the track of time, the sense of reality and my mind. It's amazing, full of emotions and life, and that makes it priceless.

About your wish - to become a writer, well, why don't you do it? I mean, that's why you're alive, aren't you? To do everything you can and want in this life! Screw everyone who's going to say something bad about you, just because they're jealous or doesn't have any brain to figure out their own life. And you know what, screw everyone, because your thoughts and your wishes is all that matters :)

You're amazing, and I'm waiting forward to chapter 28 :)
Have a good day, dear.

Diana :)

i love your story
hope you write more so i really hooked

hell fucken no you are not a sad person! you are fucken aweosme in my book. and thats a very good book to be in! lol. jk.

i do too, dont even feel bad about it. i sure as hell dont. lol all of my guitars are named Zacky. And then i have a stuffed giraffe named Jimmy, the resemblence was uncanny! lol.

yeah you tottally deserved it and you know it. it was fucken kick ass. and hilarious as all hell. i might have fell off my chair a few times. and i stayed up hella late to read it because its so kick ass.

i'd tottally buy your books. (:

I'm Audrey, btw. :D

Hey I really enjoy your story
Keep it up, its wonderful!
xx

i'll edit it out once you update
lol,
I don't do spiders,
and i feel bad for clowns
(my friend happens to be a professional one)

:o) <--- thaz a clown icon.

; ) <---Tat is not a clown icon


lol

again amazinnnnnnnng update...........kinda want something to happen between her and brian now hehe

I want to kill him off because i'm assuming he's bad, although he does seem to be really nice and quite handsome, i have to agree with the A7X boys.... Or maybe they just don't like him. He may actually be really sweet. I don't know

YOU'VE CONFUSED ME! :S

My head hurts! >.<

But yes. I do not trust him.
Maybe, don't kill him off, cus i'd feel really sorry for him. Just have him get slapped round the face, my Matt! That'll be fucking hilarious!

xxxxxx

Thanks so much for the comment.
lol. seriously.
I always have problems with the font and when I ask whats wrong noone tells me.
So do I need to change the size or color or what?

Oh my god! That was so sad, i can't believe that happened! It actually made me cry...

I THINK DALLAS RAN HIM OVER! i don't know why.... i don't like him.

KILL HIM!

:)

xxxx

great chapter, def. almost cried. will leave better story comment when it's not 5am. oh and i read your "about me" and if you have the resources to go back to school for english, DOOOOO IT. You have serious serious potential, i swear. If I were a publisher I'd publish you like yesterday. ok going to pass out now. <3

loves the new chapter!!

oh my gosh, i must sound like a baby, but i honestly cried when bella died =[ i love dogs. but yeah, i seriously cried. but its a good story and going really well =]

Im not exactly sure how to start this.
Thanks for the feedback?
I honestly do appreciate it. Your right people always say the same old stuff.
I guess I just wasn't expecting it. lol
But thank you. =)
I shall go back later, edit, when I have time. Only because I have to leave for school soon.
Thanks again.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Oh.. wow.. that's so... devastating!!!

My poor dear Helena....

I would've bawled my eyes out if that happened to me. Litteraly. Then I would've thrown my laptop at the wall and cursed it to hell!

It's just horrible... but you know you'll do it again and probably end up liking the second attempt so much more. Though it is a little bit of a downer when something horrendous like that happens and it can take a bit of effort to get back the motivation...

Btw, you know you should go back to school and major in english. Duh. = p

I send you virtual flowers and Zacky to try and cheer you up!! *waves wand*

Hey,
I loved your story Unwanted in Wonderland. it was awesome! anyways, congrats on the story, and i hope you write more like that one.

love love LOVE unwanted in wonderland!!