Oh, you've been reading for a long time then. Don't be a silent reader! I truly love hearing from all of my readers and I value your opinions and input. It makes me feel all warm and smiley to know that people from all over the world are reading my little stories and it's making them happy. :)
Hmm, that reminds me. I need to update Glitter. Blaah. :P
Hello! I'm so glad when new readers start to comment on my story- it brings such a smile to my face. And I'm thrilled that you like my little story. Honestly I was very worried that no one was going to read it and I was also a bit scared that I'm going too slowly to keep everyone's attention, but I'm relieved to know that you think it's going along well. Honestly, that means so much to me.
I've just posted the next update for Bluebird. Go check it out and let me know what you think, please? :) xx
Hey, I just did a little something for Fashion for you and the rest of the readers.
Not sure if you would be interested or not, but it is an article on Blare and Riley.
Here's the link: http://issuu.com/ralucanicoletasava/docs/fashion-article_20101111_214127
Hello(:
My names Racquel and I'm an author here.
I've recently started a Tom Kaulitz story called Deception.
And I just wanted to stop by and see if you would like to check it out.
I'm trying to see whether the story is worth continuing. I would really appreciate if you would check it out. And it would really mean a lot. No obligations though.
Thank you for taking the time to read this. And I'm really sorry for harassing you(:
Okay, but it's the same thing. Constructive criticism is supposed to help you grow as an author and that's what I was doing. Most people appreciate long comments but I wasn't going to gush that the story was awesome and that I loved this and this and this part if I didn't think it was awesome.
no problem. i like myself some tokio hotel stories. so i'll be giving comments a lot, i hope you don't mind criticism because, i like to when needed. :) and check out my stories, please?
There's no need to get snippy with me. I did what you asked. I'm sorry that I don't heap praises upon stories I only moderately like but I tell people what I think and you're going to have to deal with that. I listen to the same constructive criticism if it's not insane and stupid and doesn't make sense. I've been writing for ten years so I'm pretty sure I'm qualified to say what I said.
That's the problem with self-inserts. You can't put yourself into a story and expect it to turn out like a good story. That's why I don't do that anymore. Putting self-inserts in ends up with your character getting all the good in life or hating themselves, either one. It depends. And it's hard to write believable reactions and so on if you're writing a self-insert. I was told that when I was 11 and it changed my writing forever. That's why I write better than average now.
You wanted the comment. That's how I comment. I'm sick of the "OMFG UPDATE SOON" comments and I comment the right way, with things that can help you improve and what I think could be changed. I'm not telling you to change it -- I'm just saying that I personally see those things wrong with it. It's not my decision whether you change it or not.
Hey, I was wondering if you could do me a favor and read my new story that I have just posted. It only has one chapter so far but I am worried if I should continue or not. It is called [b]Enchanting[/b] and it would mean a lot if you comment on it telling me what you think and if I should continue it.