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  • ladyvanvan

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    Thanks. If you ever have an idea or want something to happen in 'Chosen', I'd love to hear your thoughts! :)
    May 9th, 2011 at 02:24am
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    Thank you for your comment! You just made my week! I'm so glad that you'e enjoying 'Chosen'.
    May 8th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • lifeline

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    Don't worry! I'm going to try to work more Tom in because I like writing from his POV. He's an interesting character for me. Thank you for reading<3
    February 5th, 2011 at 06:38am
  • lifeline

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    Haha, I know, right? It took long enough for Tom to show back up. ;)

    Thank you for your comment and I'm so sorry about the wait, but I've FINALLY update again. Tell me what you think?
    February 4th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • lifeline

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    Haha, I adore Char's Opa. He reminds me a lot of my own. I'm glad you like him too. :)

    Everyone is so dead set on Aimi not being real and it's so amusing to me. Aimi is just as real as Char is. ;)

    Thank you for your comment!
    January 19th, 2011 at 06:37am
  • lifeline

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    Oh, you've been reading for a long time then. Don't be a silent reader! I truly love hearing from all of my readers and I value your opinions and input. It makes me feel all warm and smiley to know that people from all over the world are reading my little stories and it's making them happy. :)

    Hmm, that reminds me. I need to update Glitter. Blaah. :P
    January 13th, 2011 at 09:19am
  • lifeline

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    Hello! I'm so glad when new readers start to comment on my story- it brings such a smile to my face. And I'm thrilled that you like my little story. Honestly I was very worried that no one was going to read it and I was also a bit scared that I'm going too slowly to keep everyone's attention, but I'm relieved to know that you think it's going along well. Honestly, that means so much to me.

    I've just posted the next update for Bluebird. Go check it out and let me know what you think, please? :) xx
    January 12th, 2011 at 06:41am
  • infiction;

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    Hey, I just did a little something for Fashion for you and the rest of the readers.
    Not sure if you would be interested or not, but it is an article on Blare and Riley.

    Here's the link: http://issuu.com/ralucanicoletasava/docs/fashion-article_20101111_214127
    November 11th, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • That's Wassup;

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    Hello(:
    My names Racquel and I'm an author here.
    I've recently started a Tom Kaulitz story called Deception.
    And I just wanted to stop by and see if you would like to check it out.
    I'm trying to see whether the story is worth continuing. I would really appreciate if you would check it out. And it would really mean a lot. No obligations though.
    Thank you for taking the time to read this. And I'm really sorry for harassing you(:
    November 6th, 2010 at 06:15am
  • the apex predator;;

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    Okay.
    November 3rd, 2010 at 12:21pm
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    Okay, but it's the same thing. Constructive criticism is supposed to help you grow as an author and that's what I was doing. Most people appreciate long comments but I wasn't going to gush that the story was awesome and that I loved this and this and this part if I didn't think it was awesome.
    November 3rd, 2010 at 12:14am
  • Oh Glory

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    no problem. remember to check out those stories.
    November 2nd, 2010 at 06:16pm
  • Oh Glory

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    nah, no rudeness unless you start. then i might or will get rude. :) but if you're not rude, im not rude. alright?
    November 2nd, 2010 at 05:58pm
  • Oh Glory

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    no problem. i like myself some tokio hotel stories. so i'll be giving comments a lot, i hope you don't mind criticism because, i like to when needed. :) and check out my stories, please?
    November 2nd, 2010 at 05:44pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    There's no need to get snippy with me. I did what you asked. I'm sorry that I don't heap praises upon stories I only moderately like but I tell people what I think and you're going to have to deal with that. I listen to the same constructive criticism if it's not insane and stupid and doesn't make sense. I've been writing for ten years so I'm pretty sure I'm qualified to say what I said.

    That's the problem with self-inserts. You can't put yourself into a story and expect it to turn out like a good story. That's why I don't do that anymore. Putting self-inserts in ends up with your character getting all the good in life or hating themselves, either one. It depends. And it's hard to write believable reactions and so on if you're writing a self-insert. I was told that when I was 11 and it changed my writing forever. That's why I write better than average now.

    You wanted the comment. That's how I comment. I'm sick of the "OMFG UPDATE SOON" comments and I comment the right way, with things that can help you improve and what I think could be changed. I'm not telling you to change it -- I'm just saying that I personally see those things wrong with it. It's not my decision whether you change it or not.
    November 2nd, 2010 at 04:53pm
  • the apex predator;;

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    If you're still reading [b]Heaven 2013[/b], it's been updated. :)
    November 1st, 2010 at 02:25pm
  • infiction;

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    Hey, I was wondering if you could do me a favor and read my new story that I have just posted. It only has one chapter so far but I am worried if I should continue or not. It is called [b]Enchanting[/b] and it would mean a lot if you comment on it telling me what you think and if I should continue it.
    October 31st, 2010 at 05:41pm
  • surfergirl

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    Thanks for the comment :) I'm updating my other stories right now, but I'll try to get one for Perfect Chemistry out tomorrow or Monday :}
    October 10th, 2010 at 08:06am
  • the apex predator;;

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    Heaven 2013 is updated after like a bajillion years. :)
    August 20th, 2010 at 03:43pm
  • LoanMeYourMelody

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    Hopefully soon, I FINALLY got an idea :D Learning guitar has been making me get out of story mode.
    August 8th, 2010 at 05:47am