Okay.
it's criticism.
And i'm sorry ahead of tiem (or after the time) Because i'm telling you what's wrong with it. I'm sure you're a perfectly nice person... but there are some things you have to follow.
Please don't hate me.
And i'm glad you liek my stories :)
Sunny-Lee <3
Thanks soo0o0o0o much for the story comment.
I'm working on the next chapter now. :)
When I post it be sure to read it.
But of course I'll be posting two chapter one wit a diary entry and one of that big day with the jonas' :)
If you did, the sequel is up!
Please check it out!