@ delete. You're very welcome. I am really in love with the vibe of your story. :) I know from personal experience how hard it is to get people reading something that isn't your typical fanfic, but you do a great job of getting the readers hooked. Plus, just the way you write, especially in the Prologue, really helps portray how the character should feel and act without having to actually describe it. And that takes true talent ;)
Thanks for the story comment. Would you mind explaining to me why you thought the story fell short a little, to better help me to write it lol, it would be a great help :)
@ Vartokk Aw that's beautiful! I'm glad you liked it, that's the best part about having the stories up on Mibba. (: Haha, yeah I can get pretty bad with those! I appreciate the advice (:
You're very welcome :). You have a talent for extracting sympathy from the reader for characters no one would normally sympathize with. And the attachment to the characters that I formed through the writing definitely made some of the moments tear-jerking. Loved it. Probably going to read more of your writing. <3 Note: With with the words that end in -ly I meant adverbs not adjectives. Talk about getting literary components mixed up :P. I had a derp moment. Haha.
Friend request accepted. (as you saw)
I'm glad you enjoy my works.
I'm Maria by the way, nice to meet you.