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  • Lady.V.

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    Thank you very much sweetheart.
    Friend request accepted. (as you saw) Mr. Green
    I'm glad you enjoy my works.
    I'm Maria by the way, nice to meet you. Cute
    April 22nd, 2014 at 06:42am
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    @ Vartokk

    Ahh, thank you! You truly just made my night Mr. Green
    March 18th, 2014 at 06:04am
  • Vartokk

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    @ delete.
    You're very welcome. I am really in love with the vibe of your story. :) I know from personal experience how hard it is to get people reading something that isn't your typical fanfic, but you do a great job of getting the readers hooked. Plus, just the way you write, especially in the Prologue, really helps portray how the character should feel and act without having to actually describe it. And that takes true talent ;)
    March 18th, 2014 at 04:46am
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    Thanks for commenting on my story! Your feedback keeps me writing and I really appreciate it. (:
    March 18th, 2014 at 03:52am
  • AliceHumanSacrifice.

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    Thanks for the story comment. Would you mind explaining to me why you thought the story fell short a little, to better help me to write it lol, it would be a great help :)
    November 20th, 2013 at 08:16pm
  • Vartokk

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    @ alexander bernadotte
    You're welcome. You have a gift when it comes to writing. Truly, you do. :)
    November 15th, 2013 at 04:11am
  • alexander bernadotte

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    thank you for your comments on fragility. c:
    November 14th, 2013 at 09:03pm
  • kimberlymarie

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    Ahh! Thank you very much for the comment on my first chapter! I hope you like the rest of it, too.
    April 30th, 2013 at 06:48pm
  • Vartokk

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    @ TaraJanee
    Any time. I always try to be helpful =].

    I'm really excited. I just posted the first chapter of my first story only a couple minutes ago. I'm thrilled to see what everyone thinks! =D
    April 28th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • Oldjane

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    @ Vartokk
    Aw that's beautiful! I'm glad you liked it, that's the best part about having the stories up on Mibba. (:
    Haha, yeah I can get pretty bad with those! I appreciate the advice (:
    April 28th, 2013 at 02:42am
  • Vartokk

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    You're very welcome :). You have a talent for extracting sympathy from the reader for characters no one would normally sympathize with. And the attachment to the characters that I formed through the writing definitely made some of the moments tear-jerking. Loved it. Probably going to read more of your writing. <3
    Note: With with the words that end in -ly I meant adverbs not adjectives. Talk about getting literary components mixed up :P. I had a derp moment. Haha.

    @ TaraJanee
    April 27th, 2013 at 05:51pm
  • Oldjane

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    Thank you for the beautiful comment and advice (: I sincerely appreciate it!
    April 27th, 2013 at 08:22am
  • AngelOfBlood

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    Hey long time no talk. how comes you haven't updated your story in a while?
    it's good
    July 13th, 2009 at 05:35pm
  • shawnahazlett

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    Sarah!
    Lets have sex!!!!!!!!!
    :) I love you, now go read my story.

    Your Straight Lesbian Lover;
    Me
    April 18th, 2009 at 04:25am
  • ruthann

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    i updated Seduction and it's a chapter in Skye's point of view.
    April 4th, 2009 at 04:54pm
  • ruthann

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    thank you for reading seduction :)
    March 26th, 2009 at 07:45am
  • creatureofthedark

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    Thanks for the poem comment. :)
    It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside...XD
    March 19th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • AJDWriter

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    Thanks for the story comment. I have four stories in the works right now and I'm working my butt off to update them all as soon as I can, lol.
    March 16th, 2009 at 03:22am
  • xStrawberryKidx

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    lol THANK YOUUU!! ^.^ and sure, i'll read it when u put it up, just tell me when =)
    March 11th, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • The Notebook

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    haha i loooooved it :D
    March 8th, 2009 at 01:22pm