Nah. You don't suck Evette. You're just a little new at this. You just need to be your worst critict (but not too much). Trust me, I'm my worst critics and lately i've been a little easy on myself. Which'll change soon. I think your story is great, the only thing that bothered me was Pregnant Mikey. Ewwwwwwww. LoL. But hey, maybe i'll think it's cute by the end of it. Keep up the good work and try not to be taken back by some ppl's comments. They'll express their opinion and i'll express mine. Just remember, that ppl are rude. They're born that way. Not all of us are High School Drum Majors with an obsession for English Culture. That kinda forces manners through ya. Give em' time. They'll come around. :D
-Becca