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  • sloshopgirl.

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    I just read the GQ Rob Pattinson interview and I was totally cracking up.. one part made me think of you though.. when he said that he reads his fan fictions, and that it is surprisingly well written... hahah, so true. I have to agree with him there ;)
    March 23rd, 2009 at 06:10pm
  • m244robp

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    Hey there! It's me, another than from Quizilla. For some reason, my login got all screwed up and I couldn't log back. Kept getting errors. I thought I read about you being here too. Looking forward to the next chapters now that you feel you've gotten it back to where you wanted it to be.
    March 17th, 2009 at 02:05am
  • zyn

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    Ohhhh! I see! XD
    Thanx for letting me know! i'll be waiting!
    have a great weekend!
    xoxo
    March 14th, 2009 at 06:07am
  • zyn

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    Hello!
    Hey! What happened to the new story?
    I was enjoying it so much!:(
    March 13th, 2009 at 11:55pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Awwwe, anytime :)
    March 10th, 2009 at 03:41pm
  • zyn

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    hahahaha
    that chapter was funny!!!
    I guess she must be very nervous about acting differently than she usually does, but it is also very exciting!
    Nice Chapter! But it was kind of short... or maybe it wasn't but I just want to keep reading and know what happens next! LOL
    Update soon!
    xoxo
    March 4th, 2009 at 06:28am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Several of the men in my family are big golfers, so it just came to me naturally, I suppose.

    I definitely know the feeling when you first start a story (especially fan fics.. those have always been the hardest for me), but I really think you are onto something here. You are such a good writer, and this is a fun way to work on writing skills and get feedback. If it helps any, I'll try to make more specific comments, other than just "I loved it!". I know I always appreciate those kind of comments. :P

    What did you think of the update? It was short, but I am always so nervous about boring people and losing readers in my updates :/ I hope people are checking out the playlist, too, because it really is such a big part of the story. (Speaking of, I loved your songs for the new story so far. Especially the last one, hahahah.)

    Okay, so now that I have written an insanely long comment, I'll be done now. :) Can't wait for the next update (I'm writing mine right now, too whoop whoop!)
    March 4th, 2009 at 04:33am
  • drivingbackwards

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    For real~ They make me feel wierd... like I'm one of the Beatles.
    Not that they are/were not amazing...

    It's just a crazy feeling.
    Thanks C:
    March 3rd, 2009 at 09:32pm
  • zyn

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    Yaaaayyy!!! You started another story already!!!
    So far I'm really liking it!
    I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!!
    I love "Friends" re-runs and I am in a "swearing off men" stage in my life! I guess Holly and I have some stuff in common, uh? XD
    Anyways... I'm sure this will be a great story!
    Write ya' soon!
    xoxo
    March 2nd, 2009 at 03:23am
  • Derpina.

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    Are you starting a new story anytime soon?
    February 28th, 2009 at 01:36am
  • drivingbackwards

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    OF COURSE I'LL READ THE NEXT ONE!
    Are you crazy ?
    I'm addicted to your writing.

    I'm not kidding C:
    February 28th, 2009 at 01:09am
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Holy cow. Your comment just made me smile so big!
    THANK YOU! Even though "Pat Robinson" is in my story, I am glad you still see it as an original, haha. I kind of only did that to see if I could grab a couple readers. It kind of works.. I feel bad for being so tricksy. :/
    But seriously, whatever you write next, I will totally be stoked on. I'm shocked that my writing would have an affect on that! Thanks again :)
    February 27th, 2009 at 09:00pm
  • sloshopgirl.

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    Oh, of course! I literally looked forward everyday to checking my email and seeing an update notification for your story. Wonderful, fabulous, lovely story..
    I'm sure the next one will be just as enjoyable.n You are genuinely talented (a diverse writer, too.. like with the magazine/news copy type parts of the story..which is great, you don't see that often.)

    I'm glad you enjoy the comments though.. I know how nice that is as a writer to see people who enjoy your work :)
    February 26th, 2009 at 05:24pm
  • zyn

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    GREAT WAY TO END IT!!!
    It couldn't be better!
    I totally loved it!
    Can't wait for your next story!
    xoxo
    February 26th, 2009 at 05:25am
  • zyn

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    Great chapters!!!
    I haven't had time to comment!
    So I just wanted to say hi!... Hi!
    xoxo
    February 23rd, 2009 at 06:15pm
  • zyn

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    Who is he speaking to?
    Who is he speaking to??????
    Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
    I need to know!!!
    February 21st, 2009 at 05:54am
  • osuchick90

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    OH PLEASE DONT LET HER DIE!!! I can seriously see him just dying if she does.... PLEASE DONT!!!
    February 20th, 2009 at 07:37am
  • zyn

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    :'( Why would you do this to me!?
    You made me cry!
    OMG! this was a very gooooood chapter!!!
    But soooo sad!
    I would not like this story to have a sad ending!
    Actually, I would not like it to have an end at all, but it has to finish sometime doesn't it?
    Will you start another story when this one ends?
    xoxo
    February 19th, 2009 at 09:49pm
  • zyn

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    I could totally see it in a magazine!
    Of course you're a journalist! I should have imagined that!
    Great article!
    xoxo
    February 18th, 2009 at 07:03pm
  • zyn

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    Awwww!!!
    I loved the last part of this chapter!!!
    Good one!
    Please don't take too long with the next one! XD
    xoxo
    February 17th, 2009 at 07:24pm