Aha, well it does need improvement and things have been left out that I meant to add in previous chapters. Also, I think I'd like to start before the invasion so readers can get some insight on Odette's parents, friends and every day life.
Grace doesn't doesn't not like her friends. She likes them, but she's not close to them. She's also kind of the ring leader of the group. They do whatever she wants to do. And she kinda notices that her friends aren't listening to her as much as they used to.
Later on in the story you'll see why she doesn't get close to people.
Cheers ;). Yeah hahahaa I thought maybe she'd warm to him a bit more if he came to her rescue ^^
Well, I haven't actually had any activity on my story, which is really surprising - usually when I update people read and subscribe, because it pops up on the front page, but nobody's read it, so I've decided to update once it's had a chance to circulate :).
Hahahaa thanks very much!! And I just posted another chapter ;). Yeah, I think you'll like Sugar & Spice - it's a bit longer, so you can really get into it :). Hahaha this'll sound really strange, but if you do read it and like it, would you comment? It's just that nobody's commented in ages ('cause it's complete) and one more will create another page, you know? :)
Might be a third coming up tonight - I'm trying to make up for my lack of updating hahaha. I have other Marauder stories though, if you want to read something in the meantime - one of them is called Sugar & Spice and it's about Sirius Black :)
Thank you for the story comment. I'm either thinkign of getting to 25 or 30 chapters before the sequel. I know what I want to write about to the end of this story, I just dont know how many chapters it will take haha.
Glad you are still stoked about this despite my lac of updates :/
One will be out soon
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