Oh, thank you but, if you think I am pretty, you must be a junkie or something. ha
That [b]is[/b] great.
I am glad you aren't one of those people I have to coax into conversation and like.. feed treats to or something. ha
I felt like becoming a sort of welcoming committee. So, welcome to mibba my good lady. And enjoy your stay at the oh so wondrous mibba. *tips hat* *whispers*I'm not wearing a hat. But shhh, don't tell anybody. I don't want people to know my secret.
People don't mind if you take awhile to update. I take a while to update on some of my stories due to school.
Yeah, people really go on the journals a lot. So they'll see it. :]
Ummm, I'll read yours, but I don't really have any of my own.
I'm okay, I guess. I'm trying to work on my homework but I'm not having much luck. Yourself?
I like giving construction criticism. Although sometimes it doesn't come out in the nicest way.
I'm sure other people will. It usually takes from 5-10 chapters for people to notice your story. Not sure why, just does. =/
You should trying posting a journal about it. Lots of people do that. :] I do it with every new story I post. ^.^
You're welcome. ^.^
Well for starters the spelling and grammar is good. I couldn't see an obvious mistake. I'm a bit OCD with grammar and spelling. :]
I like the idea you've got going with the story. Trying to connect it with real human emotions sounds like a good idea.
You make good paragraphs. That's a mistake I see on a lot of new people's writing, poor paragraph form.
You're a lot better at writing than most new people on this site are. :]