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ohyay we're mibba friends! :D

AND OMG I KNOW
soooo alike. and i guess it would mean oliver has his dad's eyes
but tom definitely has his father's face. oliver and his mom's faces are more skinnny.
and tom's is all chubbbby :) hahahaha

i love longer chapters as well
short chapters annoy me. especially if theyre all like, straight dialogue. then you know the author only took like, 40 minutes tops to write it. and then i don't even feel like i should if it only requires that much time, you know?
yeah, 3 plotlines! blake's drug addiction, tom and caroline's baby, and then oli and christian's wedding. its crazyyyy. it makes my head hurt sometimes hahaha
caroline is a bitch and i always get so mad writing about her. tom deserves someone nice and happy D:
oh and caroline is insane hahaha


my story isn't that great :) its nothing compared to some people's. some people can like, make me cry and laugh and like, omg. their writing is just amazing haha.

the story im talking about is called....well, the sequel is called We All Welcome Change. The prequel is called 'This Is Goodbye, Gravity.' if you ever wanted to check them out. theyre amazing :)

hahahaha i know, right!
i was looking at pictures of tom and oli together, and then holly found pictures of their parents, and omg. Oliver is like, spitting image of his mother, but his eyes are dark and all. and tom has his mom's eyes but looks more like his dad. so we decided that oli could have kids with bright blue eyes.
that kid would be ridiculously attractive. hahaha

and no, dont even worry about dragging it out. youve read pretty bird and people got a lotta nerve hahaha, i always drag things out wayyyyy long. i think it annoys people hahaa D:
i also like making things almost way too complicated. with pretty bird, i have like, 3 plotlines running at once haha. it gets confusing sometimes and it makes my chapters waywaywayyy long but i mean, oh well. i cant go back now haha

haha yeahh, i started writing here in june. what makes you think ive been here longer? hahaha i dont have nearly as many readers and subscribers as some people. I know of an Oli story on here that has like, 400 subscribers and at least 1000 comments. Its like, the best story ive ever read though so i mean, it deserves it haha

hahaha, yeah. I usually get it bad though.
My friend/cowriter and I usually stay up all night, promising ourselves we would write out the chapter and edit it and all, but we always just end up sending eachother stupid youtube videos and talking about if Oliver Sykes could have kids with blue eyes like his brother's. hahahaha

But yeah, I do like it! A lot!
I actually normally dont even like stories set to where Oli and BMTH are in school, but your characters are so young, its different and fresh and I like it.
And Jordan doing the murder/suicide was sooo unexpected! It was a great plot twist!

It's alright, I am a noob on here too. I've been posting for like, a month now. I am also building my fanbase, and its a long process haha.
Maybe you would get more readers if you didnt just add all the chapters at once? It would give your story more exposure time I think.
But thats just what I'd do :)

ahhhh, sorry
im so terrible at commenting back
ADD D: hahaha
but yeah. thankyou so much for all the story comments! even for the curtis cowrite and for the oliver sequel!
i actually got so into your story, a few nights ago i logged onto my ancient quizilla i made in like, 2004, just to find it and read more.
so keep on posting, and writing! pleaseeee
:)

No problem! It's really really good. :)

I'm feeling a lot better today, so fingers crossed I'm on the mend.
I'll definitely be calling you up on that offer of help, I'm being so overly careful and picky about writing 'Sideshow' I'm just so used to writing characters that people already kind of have knowledge of. I need to stop being so finnicky and let it flow I think. Hmm.
I see you have both Oliver and Alex Gaskarth stories :) so expect some comments come tommorow.
Gonna catch some zzzz's though now bro. X

Thank You so much for two wonderful comments; one of which is the [b]first[/b]ever comment for Sideshow! And for that you get extra praise.
I'm stoked you love both stories so much, I've worked mega hard on my Oliver series and it's nice to know it's all worth it, and that because of that you're interested in my original.
Sideshow's making me nervous dude.
Anyway, enough rambling, just wanted to say a big cheers.
Hope you're having a good day
X

Hey can you tell me what your quizilla is? i no thats weird lmfao but i have one too and you said you had one on your story sooo yeah i wanted to add you =]

no way! seriously?!
well, im glad you liked it! and i hope youll like the sequel!
its always the coolest thing ever to know that someone appreciates what you write, so, thanks for reading it!
but seriously, i loved your story, even if its just the beginning chapter. most of the times, it just takes the first few paragraphs for me to decide if i like something or not, and yours definitely caught my attention. so, good job! ill be looking forward to the update :)

suppppppp?

heeeeeeey!