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    oh étouffer,
    vous ne serez jamais me vaincre!
    May 21st, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • trecool567

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    Thats cool, thats the reason I joined this site, for green day fan fics, but I've found a lot more amazing stories since then, I freaking love this site =)

    But yeah, Julies more obsessed then me..I think anyways xD
    May 21st, 2011 at 01:49am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    I shall try! He was a beautiful... creature(?) killed by my arch nemesis... Breanna! I don't know how a person as happy and smiley as her could have killed such an innocent minion... But she did.
    We so will be! And I like our version better, no cheesy jokes = thumbs up.
    Lol, so I guess we are a more sinister version of batman and robin? We are trying to brain wash the world after all.
    Oh really? That's hilarious! Minions are awesome. If I ever became a villain, I would say "Screw super powers! I want minions!" and while I might not be successful, I would be a very amused villain.
    Its not that difficult. Its actually quite orderly. We get a prompt put up every Wednesday and we must post our story by the next prompt. Extra credit poems are placed on random days for the people who actually check the thread. Also one time we got to choose to write a poem about one of three pictures. If we wrote one on all three we got bonus points. And I don't mind if I don't get to submit them, I didn't make them for the contest anyways. Who know, maybe I'll write something even better!?! Though it would be nice to be able to use them :)
    May 21st, 2011 at 01:47am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    Lol, oh really?!? I've always wanted sidekick... And a minion... Actually I had one but he died the day he was created, poor Corbin. That reminds me, I am going to give him a viking funeral!
    I don't think your works are an acquired taste, they are pretty good. I think once you get some more out there and the right people see them... KA-BLOWEE! You will be more popular :) My poems aren't that popular either, they just seem like it; but its just because they are in a contest.
    I did ^.^ and yes, I have to enter one each week. Plus there are extra credit poems and the like, I've done all the extra credit stuff just to retain the spot I have! Its pretty crazy O.O Pre-writes are allowed but because I haven't been into poetry for all that long, I don't have many. I'm hoping for a prompt that allows me enter one though. The hint for the prompt next week gives me hope that I might be able to enter Time's Question or Inner Rain.
    May 21st, 2011 at 01:30am
  • Unknown3433

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    hey thanks for the comment!!
    May 21st, 2011 at 01:13am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    I'm glad we are in agreement. If only we could delude the world as well as ourselves... *Hrm...*
    We don't get eliminated every week, we get new prompts and whatnot. So it might sound tougher than it is. But the others are really freaking good, so I'm just aspiring to earn a placing not necessarily first.
    Lol, its okay you don't need to. But you can tell which ones I entered because a person in the comments will be awarding me points and whatnot. Most of the poems I have up are for the contest, it would actually be better if I told you which ones weren't in the contest. Those are Inner Rain, Lesson Learned, Child In Me and Time's Question.
    Oh and I really enjoyed your last poem! In case you couldn't tell from my comment. It was awesome like a possum!
    May 21st, 2011 at 12:51am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    Lol yep. And I know plenty more ramblers and crazy people too, in fact, we might be normal and everyone else might be crazy!
    Yeah I'm really excited about it :) And the contest is ongoing, its a ten week contest, I believe we're in our fifth or sixth week now. I'm not in the lead, I'm in fourth. There are lots of entrants and they are all marvelously talented! Its crazy! So I don't mind not winning, though I should be bumped up to third place soon. (We get points for comments on the poems we entered, lol)
    Really? That's awesome! That's really cool that you made it that far :)
    May 20th, 2011 at 05:08am
  • trecool567

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    Hehe..yeah well, that little birdie has her own little obsessions..xD
    Do you like fan fics?
    May 20th, 2011 at 02:57am
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    vous gagnez :(
    May 20th, 2011 at 01:50am
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    Excuse Me Miss belles paroles, mais je suis très intelligent, si je voulais, je pourrais facilement de comprendre ce qu'ils signifient.

    Figure that out!!! *sticks out tounge*\
    mwah
    Bonne journée
    May 19th, 2011 at 11:32pm
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    oh i see haha no wonder I didn't understand :p hee hee
    May 19th, 2011 at 11:12pm
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    Where ever do you get all these words :)
    Is it jersey slang ?!!!! :o
    May 19th, 2011 at 10:59pm
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    what is a sloothe? o.o
    May 19th, 2011 at 09:29pm
  • trecool567

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    Awh, thanks, I try xD
    SoOoOo..you like green day?
    May 19th, 2011 at 03:35am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    You definitely are, they've improved. I'm glad somebody else thinks that way too. I am constantly trying to improve myself and become a better writer. In fact, I just started writing poetry a few weeks ago, when I randomly joined a poetry contest. I have since discovered that I love poetry. I also try my hand at various genres in stories and whatnot. Trying to improve myself.
    Moral of the story: I understand that you want to improve yourself. Its a great goal.
    May 19th, 2011 at 03:03am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    I didn't think you were complaining, I just felt bad. i wasn't trying to get you to read my poems.
    Yeah, I just made that for a poetry contest, it was based off of this quote "An elegant suicide is the ultimate work of art." - Stay
    I really enjoyed writing it, I got inspired practically right away. I realize I could have gone deeper with the quote but the poem was almost already made once I started writing. Thanks for the comment on it as well :) I'm glad it all mixed well, I thought it did, but you can't really trust your own opinion on stuff you write. At least I can't. And its okay, I ramble too. <--- Now obvious :)
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    Thanks for the comment on my poem :) Its one of my favorites. I was inspired after going for a walk in the rain. I've always loved the rain.
    Though you seriously don't have to read through all of my poems, I didn't expect you to!
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:34am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    You don't need to. I read them because I was interested :) They get more and more creative as you went on in your writing. I liked your more recent ones better, but I still liked the vibe of the older ones as well.
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:30am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    Too late XP I read through them all. I only left a comment on one, since I fail at thinking something up for every one. I like them all though, very creative :D
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • VeiledInsanity

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    You're welcome :)
    I liked it. Actually, I liked it enough that I'm probably going to look at some of your other poems ^.^
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:16am