It is the right way to go. But I don't think I have the will power to do so. That sounds really cool. Sounds like something written about a slave. Then they got chased around and killed like they usually were. "a short lived freedom"
Or a person who commited a crime and just got out of jail, then they went off and did something else wrong. Well that's what comes to mind for me.
Lol. Most people DO write just to amuse themselves. I don't think many people do it to please others. Unless it's a class assignment, then i see it.
I know you have many comments, and I can see that people on this site love you! So I'll make this quick, but I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your poems, and literally every single one of them. You truly and clearly have a gift for the poetic, and you have inspired me. I really only discovered your poems about two days ago, but my whole perspective on poetry and the way I view it has shifted. 'Eloquence' is my favorite, though it is extremely hard to favor one the most. The nub and gist is that I wanted to genuwinely thank you for your inspiration, and I hope that you post new poems because I can never be too inspired. :)