Hey! I just started Mibba and don't know how to work it if you could help me out that'd be great!
Also, i love your story! Brad sounds hot and I like how you write from your characters point of view, I ususaly write with a narorator. I'm going to start the first chapter to one of m own pieces if you could check it out =]
To make it intense, let the relationship develop. Keep us on our feet, anticipated. Maybe throw in a few secrets in here and there. I don't know, just a few ideas.
And I know what you mean. I have the block all the time.
heh heh i swear lolz
there awsomenezz
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