And the one that I actually caught the first time was this one though: "...“I’ve been trying to! She keeps ignoring me and has been for the bast few weeks. That’s why I need you to tell me where she is!”.."
Right around here is where the error is: "I sighed, running a hand over my face in exhaustion. “You don’t understand Jenn, I think... I think I’m the reason she ran away.” I took a deep breathe before I continued." Otherwise, the chapter was great. :)
my frined have a story calld once in a lifetime, have you read it?
i think you would like it if you like Nick jonas.
her name on mibba is outinthecold@mibba
would mean very much if you wanted to read and come up with an opinion :)
Thank you so much for commenting on my new story even though I don't have anything up yet.
I probably won't get anything out till summer. I have a lot of writing to do. :-D
I loved you comment, sorry if I haven't said anything before! :-D
Can't wait to see your reactions to it.....Oh YEA! please go back in there and answer some of the questions that would be wonderfull! :-D
-Writer of [b]I'm Stuck In the Freezing Cold With Who!?!?[/b] and [b]I'm falling in Love With Who?!?![/b]
Thank you so much. ^_^ I'm glad you like [i]Please Don't Cross Me, I Asked Nicely[/i]. I'll probably update later on today or sometime this week. Again, thank you for the comment.
Hey i was just wondering if you could check out my story Outside and In? Its my first one on here and its not a fanfiction but an riginal one and I was hoping you could give me some feedback ha thanks.
http://stories.mibba.com/read/328287/Outside-and-In/
Thank you for subscribing to "I'm falling in love with who?" Even though I don't have any chapters up. Please look at those picture because I can't deside which one for June. I need HELP!
I got your message. I read the summary, but I got to go so I'll read it later, but it looks really interesting. I was wondering if you have read my stories? I have just finshed my very first story and I'm sure you know how that feels: sort sad, but so excited that I acomplished it! Lol. Please go check out [b][i]all[/i][/b] my stories!!!! I still have a few that I write when I'm bored that no one really reads, but i can't make them ( as much as I wish I couldn't Hhahahhahah). Have a great day!!!
I've commented and subscribed to Save the Day. :) Could you please check out [i]Please Don't Cross Me, I Asked Nicely[/i] and [i]Soul Exposure III[/i]? Possibly comment?
Hey! Im Breanne :] I see you like the Jonas Brothers. I just started a new story called “Into the rain” Is there any way that you can check it out and give me some feedback? Thanks :D