okay so i wrote the first two paragraphs of a story. tell me what you think:(oh and it is kinda Harry Potter with the ship of Ron and Hermione so yeah)I walked silently as the air stalked me. I quickly glanced behind my shoulder, watching my surroundings. Then, I stopped. I heard the bushed twitch as I looked to my left. I was scared, beyond scared, I was terrified what my fate would come to.I...