Oh mistakes? Oops! Sorry about that, but I was in a rush since I was going to be out of town and stuff so I just wanted to get it up. Sorry again though.
But thanks a lot for the comment I appreciate it, and am actually working on the next chapter now :)
Hello!
Thank you so much for the comment.
I really appreciate the time you took to write it and the helpful things you included.
I'll try to be a little more clear [I usually play out the things in my head so I forget things as you mentioned,] and I hope you continue to read it.
All the best! =]]