its later and im writing
XD
and thatsa about how smart i am
so.................
haihai
and buhbye pretty message box
i luffed thee well
XD now im going crazy
**slams head on comp deskk**
that actually helped
:O
oh i know! i know exactly what you mean. in some of my poems i do rhyme with less words, but for some reason i had the hardest time with this one. i swear ive had this poem for about two months, i just gave up on it. but thanks a lot, cause i love feedback, even if it is constructive criticism.
i read your poem dark
and even though it was short and not sweet
i can relate to it
i think its an awesome poem.
^.^"
**does a geeky cheerleader impression**
GO
FIGHT
WRITE!!!!!!
XD