Green Raspberries. / Comments

The main character wont just go away. I promise she just wont be the main character if you know what I mean. lol sorry if it disappointed you. xx

I'm glad you like my story.

I have completely changed the plot and all of that stuff so it seems like brand new story. People seem to like this one better than my first draft. It's written better.

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thanks i will

Thanks for you comment and for reading. Thanks for giving me your opinion too. xoxo

Hun, I know exactley what your going threw. {The whole A/N note thing}
Its the exact same way for me.
You should try to talk to someone that knows someone that knows someone that talks to him etc.
And who knows, eventually you might be talking to him.

Life ish good, thanks xD

muy bien! ch. 9 is very well written, just like all the other chapters. XD I hope Waverly can get over the vampire, werewolf thing and get in touch with her werewolf side. ;)

awesome! :) i love it xD ooh edward is a hard character to portray O_o but you did splendid :] update soon :D im tuned in ;] i gotta see how this will story plays out :D

You're very welcome :] i loved reading it :) haha i do that with some of the characters i read about too :D when characters come to life, you know its a good story :]

Hey hey Whit-nay! x] Long time now speak!
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i do the exact same thing too! I get an insane idea of a story, start to write it down and then i get writers block and end up starting a whole new story. O.o it's a cycle. XD I think way to fast for me to write anything down. I'll be good w/ this story tho. ;) And don't forget to update. I wanna see what's eating Edward and gotten him all in protective mode. XD

Thats cool that you take it seriously and you work hard to make em better. And its totally payin' off. ;D I'm just getting used to actually righting an actual story instead of just thinkin' about em in my head. XD

Hello Whitney :) I'm Alice. Your writing style is very good :] You get all the angles from the characters & keep readers informed with what they think as well. Waverly is very relatable & i agree with Phoenix21 when she says Waverly is spastic but spunky. she's cute in that way :)

Thanks for reading my story. :) I love Waverly and her spastic but spunky kinda attitude. :D

Thanks for the comment! :) I'm glad you like my story, I'm not too crazy about it though... anyways, I'm gonna look at your story! :)

Thanks =)

okie dokie.

Hey.

Thanks. I will do :)

I should really update mine, but I'm lazy xD I started writing a new one with my friend, which is my rather lame excuse.

I will do so :)