Thank you so, so much for the story comment. I really appreciate it. :3
About the 'I've/I'd' thing, I was thinking that it would be used in the sense that the character had never really noticed this attitude or personality change in the other character before. If that makes any sense at all. xD
lol i completely understand Natalie screaming too. I would have done the same thing if i met my idol lol. I think everyone would actually. =D
And lol i don't think that you were the only one. I think everyone so far has freaked about the kiss. rotflol but i think that you're the only one who laughed. lol
lol believe me you're not the only one who hates how Natalie's changed. So many people asked me why i had to change her and such. lol i don't think anyone expected her to change in the sequel, but hey that's what i was going for something unexpected lol.
And lol i wish i could tell u if she's going to realize what she's doing, but i can't. All i can say is stay tunned lol.
And im actually working on the next chapter right now lol
=D
Thanks for the feedback. I love detailed comments like that. They help me improve my story.
I'm glad that you like Natalie's character, i was trying to make her as realistic as possible. I'll also try to give Justin more depth.
lol i had actually forgot about the Starbucks scene, lol i had to go back and read it myself.
I added the part with the fan-girl so that it would be a bit more realistic. Apparently some of Justin's fans do really desperate things to get his attention so i figured that this would be pretty desperate, though it was extremely ignorant.
I'm soo glad that you liked the story and will subscribe to the sequel =D
Hello there.
I noticed in your gallery that you've posted pictures of your artworks. I think (though I'm not certain; I'm searching for the actual rule on the boards now) that this is against the rules. I just thought I'd point it out to you so you don't get in trouble with the Mods or Administrators about it.
If you're looking for feedback on your artwork, the appropriate place to post it is the Art thread. It's under Photos > Other. It's usually on the first page, near the top.
I hope the suspense will be worth it. I know, I didn't really show Rose's liking for the woman except by saying so. I'll try make her show her feelings to a more physical aspect but I'm struggling to pinpoint her character. I think I was just lazy when I typed that part though. :3
That's why I hate class essays. You get a few random topics and you're forced to write 500 words in an hour and a half about something out of the blue. Thanks so much for your comment once again!
Thank you! Yup, I'm updating quickly because I may not update again in a week...or two. I have serious exams and I have to concentrate on them. But I may even update again tomorrow! I never know, depends on inspiration and work load. x_x
Thank you for the comment on Torn Fragility. I know it's boring; I was kind of depressed when I wrote it but that's no excuse. I'll update the next chapter today which is when everything gets moving a bit Thank you for subscribing, you have no idea how happy I am!