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Hey (:
Hey there
If you could, please read my new story, "This The Part When I Find Out Who I Am?"
and comment / give feedback ?
xo , Cynnie.

ikr?
All my friends and like school mates are like "YOU SHOULD BE PUT TO SHAME" :P they just like to stare at Rob Pattinson, but he's not worth staring at o.e

yeah, i saw them live back in febuary of last year
before shake it blew up
they suckd and acted like they were the sh*t
its like, you guys are a POP band, not some hard core act
just really annoys me

thanks for the story comment :]

i JUST made all time low
i wasnt sure the academy is... had gone yet so i kept on watching hoping the hadnt and they had
SO I WATCHED MILEY FOR AN HOUR FOR NOTHING
you recommend the mtv buzzworthy backstage interview...priceless jack moments

ur welcome :)
my new year was alright,
all time low was the best thing about it
just mad that i had to watch miley

lmao I know he looks like a rapist half the time XD

hi.
i really like ur jack story
its great
happy new year!

I mean, you don't have to, I just really like editing.
And I like your story, too, so I just want to be able to make it better with better grammar.

Um, would it be all right if I beta read for you?
It's just that there are small little grammar mistakes that if dealt with, would make your story so much better.

Thank you.
I think I'll look into reading it now. :]

That's cool.
Can I make a suggestion?
You should do some more paragraph separation.
It's hard to read when its all one blob like that.

hey
im good helping my mate out with his party for tonight cant wait to see my mates again
You doing anything for new years ??

Yay! I'm excited now! I love your story.
Oh wow, I'm like super excited now!!! ^_^

That's good.
I'm all right.

I'm sorry, but I'm glad to see that you got it up.
I love Jack so I just might have to check it out.

ROFL XD
Sorry about that
Alright, I seriously cannot stop laughing.
but Edward looks like he's on pot and his hair annoys me D:<

lmao
i have a lot of friends like that
they all yell at me when I say Edward is ugly and too perfect
and if you do watch the movie watch for the vampires "dancing in the background burning the james XD.
it's hilarious!

twilight was horrible...
I don't get why everyone was all "EEEEEEEEEEEEK"
i mean the book was good, but bad at the same time lmao
and I'm not really a movie person but I think my teacher recommended the Boondock saints when she was sharing about herself lol

like...
WALL-E :DDDDDD

lol that's pretty sweet.
i saw it on abc family like just acouple of days ago
my friend were saying how sad it was
and i got to say they were right ha ha