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No ya, I totally get it now! Wow... it's beautiful! That's awsome lol
And don't worry... i'm like that too :P

Your story is awesome :) I really enjoyed reading it! :D

Ah, yes. Hayley is probably the most beautiful girl I've ever seen.
{I don't prefer to call girls hot. I find it degrading.]

Thank you! :) I'm glad that story reaches out to [i]someone[/i]. Actually, I've been meaning to write the next chapter for that so expect to see a new chapter this month.

thank you. :)

i love Tonks. she's clumsy and changes her hair color alot. reminds me of myself. haha

Cool... I'll try working on my new intro. soon.
Oh, thanks! Sure, i'd love to read yours!

yeah i know what you mean
personally ive played out cemetary drive
and basically everything else from that album
umm im kind of obsessed with their first album right now though
i love panic, theyve changed alot since fever but i still love them
i have my favorites from each album though

Have it in like, a two-shot or something.

Yes, u are deffinately helping... I've actually been working on this story for about... let's see... 2 or 3 years? lol So obviously I want to keep improving it and make it the best it can be. I spend way more time editing it than I do actually writing it... yes, I am somewhat of a perfectionist... lol
Anyway... I think I'll start with a little more of an introduction to Tyler.. kind of explain her personality and her family... but not with too too much detail... maybe say something like "my life has never been what you'd call normal"... and then lead into that day... stick with the same idea I already had, u know?
What do u think?

Course.

Writing.
You?

ahh so youre into three cheers?
yeahh, that was my fav album by them
but in all truthfulness ive fallen in love with sleep
its kind of epic you know?
but video wise the ghost of you is my life

thanks for the comment... so how do u suggest I improve the beggining?

Yeah, I will work on making Speranza (hopefully) easier to understand. Sorry about that. Anything else you think needs improvement?

youre welcome =]
yupp. i love me some my chem
lol whats your favorite song?

Welcome to mibba =]
What's up?

Hey Randi, welcome to mibba! I'm Zacky :)
... mind reading my story, Mischief's Run? (A comment would be greatly appreciated too :) :P).

hey Randi!
i'm asia
welcome to mibba!

Ayye;Welcome to mibba! : ]

Hello.

hey Randi
welcome to mibba
i'm Joy

Thank you :]