September 4th, 2010 at 02:06am
wow the last chapter was amazing!
i loved how bri walked into the party with his daughter and everyone was like na shes not yours,
lol in my opinion you ended the story in the right place for a sequel!
like you i also loved the last line, it bought it all together! im already suscribed to the sequel! no doubt about that lol, i look forward to reading the first chapter!!!
your an amazing author!
(lol man this comments massive lol)
im just about to read the first chapter in 'your tragic fate' now!
wow, i dont show my mates my writing very often, but i know what ya mean!