You're character is gonna be in it a lot more, don't worry. That was mostly a focus on Melanie, and the whole background thing. You're still gonna be in the sequel, too.
Thank you for another comment, and for the song title for the contest.
I'm planning on waiting a week or two to give evryone a times to read it before I pick the winner and give out the (lame) prize of a place in the story.
Hey!
I noticed that you commented on my story 'A Simple Twist of Fate' and I wanted to let you know how much the reading of and commenting meant to me - which is alot!
Anyhow, the sequal is out now, entitled 'Another Heart Calls'. Care to check it out?