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I really like your poems :]

nice poems (:

thanks for the comment on my poem, "The Lies" :) and actually, it's not about drugs or anything lmao. it's literally about lies. like....basically the poem is trying to say how lies can suffocate you, because if you tell one lie it'll lead to another to cover that lie up and then to another and another and another. it's just a vicious cycle.

Your poems are really good. Theres so much emotion in them it feels as if your seeing it acted out infront of you.

You are very talented with your poetry, please write more you are very good at what you do :)

Wow, I really like them :]]
I love the flow, they're really deep

Thanks for the comment on my poem! It really means a lot to me :)

I love your peoms i really do :)
if you ever want to talk feel free to hit me up anytime xD

i read your poems, they're really amazing :)
tell me when you get more posted?

thank you so much for the wonderful comments on my poetry i absoluitly adore you for that >.<

Read your poems and they are amazing. Strength's Weakness is my favorite.

Thank you :) I'm so glad you like my poems! As far as "Perfect" the end is what I wrote first then I thought of the rest. A lot of my poems are a bit like that.

I studied many forms and types of poem written by poets from the nineteenth and early twentieth century so I'm more into classics and I get all analytical ^^; but your poems are okay. I like poems that put an image in my head and sort of touching all my senses. So try using a lot of metaphors and figure of speech :3 another way to get your point across more is the use of the structure of your poem so think about rhythm and the number of beats there are per line that can add tone to your poem. Sorry if I'm being a too criticizing ><

Hey I know you Steph! (to the person's commentbelow me.) I finally read your message and I do like your poetry :D

So, i'm actually not a big poem person, but I did read. :D
Theyre [i]really[/i] good! I'm now wondering what made me avoid poetry so much.

Read your poems. Just watch your grammar/typos here and there, but the ideas and writing is strong. "Failure's Art" is my favorite :) Definitely keep writing.

i read ur poems and they were great!! :)

heart ur poems!

your poems are great, :D

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