Can't wait to find out! But please, I beseech you, don't make whatever happens to Jami be something mean and horrible just because you don't like her. Even if it is depressing, please make it so that she's got an ending that's a little better than that. Please?
But of course I say nice things! But it feels weird to leave those nice things where I know you'll see them…feels like you'll think it's fake. Which, of course, it's not!
You hate the most random words…"hottie" and "annoying". Words I must use too frequently. Anyway, I can definitely see why you don't like Chris. The only reason CSIBTY is being rewritten is because I didn't have a Mibba account when I started it, I posted them on another site. When I got my Mibba, I could see things that I didn't like, and I decided to edit it so it's Mibba-worthy. Otherwise, you'd have twenty-two chapters, several burning questions, and not such a good story.
CSIBTY: Plenty decent comment, I just want something more descriptive than your basic opinion, and that was. Chris is annoying, you're right. Can you believe he has a fan? (One that's not me, of course. I like Chris, but I have my secret reasons.) Of course the guys save her! Wasn't that the point?
IIB: I did get some feedback for it, just not in the form of a comment. I think Jackie will be a major supporting character. I will get more up once I decide what will happen next to make Chapter 3 less lame-sounding from what my first draft was. (I don't have much written out like CSIBTY, but I did write part of Chapter 3, and I don't like that version anymore.)
oh...
and no i havent read the prequel yet.
but i will.
i didnt even no there was one till i was like on the 15th chapter of close my eyes and breathe u in.
lol.