Awe, you are such a sweetheart. Honestly, I get worried because I post these and then bash myself thinking that I don't get the dialogue or emotions or situations right. I'm so glad that their relationship makes sense :]
Right? That's one thing my boyfriend comments on a lot - that I smell good. It's wonderful haha
I think that's a perfectly logical response to have in a grocery store. I've done much more embarrassing things.
Thank you so much for the comment. Honestly, most of the drama in general drives me crazy. Like the first season went so smoothly because they were fighting to survive the whole time and not talking about who was having who's baby. Annoying. Plus, I actually sort of dug Shane (when he wasn't being a psycho).
Obviously I guess there has to be an element of drama but...it's still about zombies haha
I want to make beautiful, rugged sex with Daryl too. And so I live through that fantasy by writing beautiful, rugged sex scenes for my stories hahaha :]
Hopefully you'll enjoy.
And thank you again, seriously. I'm so thankful for anyone that takes the time to read any of my stories.
Yeah our school is one of the state underdogs but we're still pretty high ranked. My school is all about the music which is the only reason I'm still in this lame town. I'm moving to the other side of the country and hopefully the world at the first chance I get.
As for ending the story like that, with the rejection, I would have been thoroughly confused and pissed I'd spent so long reading it for the whole relationship to just be over with no explanation and no reason for there ever being a relationship. Because ending it there would have ended not on the romantic relationship but the years of friendship and that's harsh. I probably think too much about stories but you're a talented writer in that you make my heart tear for people that don't exist. THAT is why writers write.
lucky! we're too low-budget for anything cool, seriously. ><'
I'm jealous, haha
you're welcome, but what do you think would've happened if it ended there? It wasn't my first instinct to end it at the rejection, but I thought later it would've been a poor reflection on their relationship, a very, very unhappy ending; Zack managed to change her so many times, both intentionally and accidentally, but in the end it wasn't enough, you know?
kind of bittersweet and very still-ringing-in-your-ears kind of ending