April 30th, 2009 at 11:29pm
Yup, I love your story that much I really get into it.
P.S. Write another chapter.
P.P.S. Read my new poem :D
P.P.P.S. I love your stories
flyonthewall13 / Comments
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April 23rd, 2009 at 04:24am
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i love the story keep it moving
love jcpennyApril 20th, 2009 at 05:34pm -
kk, I just can't wait to hear him explainApril 20th, 2009 at 01:19am
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woohoo!!
i loooove drama lol i'm looking forward to it
and i like those bill pictures you just put up =]
he always makes me smile lolApril 19th, 2009 at 09:01pm -
ah well. Hey, if you need some advice on what to write next, you could always use jgm44's idea n. 2, but face to face, not over the phoneApril 19th, 2009 at 05:16pm
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oooh, i see that you and i have the same celebrity crushes. oh yeaa baby! love the story, 'confusion' by the way.April 19th, 2009 at 05:05am
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OK I'LL GIVE YOU SOME REVIEWS.
1) MAKE JOE GET UP AND TALK TO KYLEE ABOUT BEING WITH EDWARD.
2) OR LET JOE EXPLAIN HINSELF TO KYLEE WHY HE KISSED TAYLOR
3) OR MAKE TAYLOR COME TO SEE JOE BUT ACCIDENLY SEE KYLEE AND FEEL SORRY FOR HER.
4) OR MAKE TAYLOR TALK TRASH WHEN JOE LEAVES THE STORE MAYBE.
THATS ALL I HAVE, I WISH IT HELPS YOU OK
LOVE JCPENNYApril 18th, 2009 at 03:04am -
wow, nice cliffhanger. Please hurry up and update. BTW have you ever notice that almost every waitress is called Beatrice? weird!April 17th, 2009 at 03:18pm
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i still dont mind spelling wrong any way. so im going to read chapter 21 on confusion wish me good luck
love jcpennyApril 15th, 2009 at 03:15am -
i read it and commented
once again it was amazing :]April 13th, 2009 at 11:22pm -
ok I will I have the link to my twlight/jonas story up on my mibba if you don't mind reading it.April 13th, 2009 at 06:28pm
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Same as No Name Writer! But I love it! Write soon!April 13th, 2009 at 05:48am
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Ahh I thought you meant JUST now, I've already read that chapter! Good Job! LOVE it! (Sorry kind of hyper of easter candi! haha!)April 13th, 2009 at 01:14am
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Sweet! Going to go read now!April 13th, 2009 at 01:13am
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I Cant Remember My Ideas, I Thought Of Them Yesterday, And Now There Gone :(
Lol, But There Is Gotta B Some Action.
Its Better If Yhuu Suprise Me, Im Dying To Read The Next Chapter, I Love This Story, And Chapter 20 Has To B The Best Cos Edwards Back And Im On A Cliffhanger Hehe.April 11th, 2009 at 12:28am -
Hey!!!
What's up??! (:April 9th, 2009 at 06:44pm -
Heyya, ive been reading your story 'Confusion', it is really interesting i nearly died when it said the boys were back from hunting then cliffhanger .....right now im guessing all the possibilities of whats gonna happen next and its driving me crazy lmao....cant wait for next chapter. xxApril 9th, 2009 at 05:08am
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im sorry your were in a rush. my bee. i love chapter 20 its awesome. i can give u some tip on the next chapter......
1) make edward surprised that kyelle
2) make the slumber party fun
3) make kyelle see joe at a place: lte them talk to each other
thats all i got i wish it helps you thanx alot
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love jcpenny- {}April 9th, 2009 at 02:35am -
OMG I'M SO GLAD THAT I'M TALKING TO A NATIVE!!! LOL I live in NW right near American University. MY mom and i live in an apartment but my grandparents own one of those monsterous houses they call a home..(more like a country to me) lol My grandparents own a small shop on 18th street. OMG I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW AMAZING THIS IS!!! lolApril 8th, 2009 at 01:50am
its one of my favorites. the intro is absolutely amazing lol