XtomJames / Comments

I've given a general commentary on the story you asked me to Eagle. If you want specifics I'll be glad to go over some suggestions and points.

You say you can be ruthless. I would really like someone to read my book, "Don't want to see her cry" and not be afraid to hurt some feelings. Hit me with your best shot, if you have time. I'm taking dual credit classes, so I understand if you don't.

Now I want to state something to anyone that wants me to review poems, stories, or articles. As a writer and as a college student, I read things in depthly, and I tend to be ruthless in my reviews. So if you want me to review your work, be ready for a very strict response. I don't do it to be cruel, as I try to be as constructive as possible in my criticism, but I won't be the person that goes "Oh, wow, this is awesome"

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Its not that it sucks, so much as its just not good. Its a standard poem that everyone at one point or another writes. Look at the poem I have on here and tell me if you can see a difference.

Cheyeah. I was going soooo insane from getting praise for something that obviously sucks. (Like, per se, the fifth poem I've ever written.)

Eh I know, I'd rather have a direct critique pointing out my mistakes than have praise for poor work.

Thanks for the critique ^_^. I actually reeeeally needed one, 'cause to be frank writing without critique leaves no room for improvement. (Or, say, knowledge of what you need to improve on. Whatever.)