i suppose there are a few reasons why it captures my attention. maybe there are other stories like it out there, but this is one of the first ive read. i like your main character. even though she's obviously a bit of a trouble maker, she seems innocent. and im really interested to see where this complicated romance leads. :)
no problem. im kinda a perfectionist, i get annoying sometimes. i just noticed that "I" wasn't always capitalized. small things like that, no big deal. easy to overlook, i do it all the time! :)
Although, all the friendliness is kind of scary.
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