So good to hear from you--sounds like you're staying busy! Thank you so much for the story comment. Yours always make me smile for so long people wonder what I've done wrong! XD I'm glad you like the characters; I wondered how it would be to have a story already unwinding when the band comes into it. And they inspired the whole thing of course...
cool, Okay so I'm having this problem,
I'm trying to figure out how to right
this scene where the two main character are in
a car and are having a hilarious debate about music
It's very frustrating. I've been working on it for about 3 months now :/
ehh I was just wondering, (If you have the time) if you could like check my writting for spelling and grammar. you are one of the only good writters I know on here.
Lol, why thank you. i did steal the concept from FP tho. i would write one for you my darling but im preeeeetty sure youre a much better writer than i am and so i think you should do one yourself :P love you lots!! xx
omg omg I started reading crowded like 4 years ago on comingclean and I've just found the rest of it here now! I clicked on it and thought the last time I read it, there were only 20 chapters and now there's double that. I've just spent the last 2 hours reading it from the beginning, word for word and I fucking loved it. I actually think its one of my favourite stories on here, it was just perfect. Everything flowed together, everything felt so natural and that last chapter with the photograph just made my stomach feel fuzzy <3
Elle, how wonderfully Crowded ended. You went the complete opposite way I thought you would - Definitely thought Tre and Billie would be fighting over Jamie.. didn't even think about little ol' Jay in the background. Brilliant!
Aw, you know what - Funny you left me a comment! I had a spur last night and I couldn't help but go and read Crowded again.. I can't believe I saw updates!!!
Yeah. Man, the nerve of some people...
And you can most likely tell that she didn't write it anyway because if you read some of her other stuff, the style isn't the same. I haven't read any of her other stuff, but you know what I mean.