i <3 craig, and i love this story too. Its really up to you whether you want to make it longer, but on one hand, the first chapter is incredibly powerful just by itself. But it's really interesting when it's longer! Haha. No matter what you do with it, im sure i'll like it XD
I loved your story, "its not what they say about you..." i find it really hard to finish short stories, and i think you did a really great job on it. :)
i guess, but just remember, be a proud canadian XP (canadians rock =P) like we have awesome things like Tim Hortons and smarties :) (yummm)
and haha, i like that, masshole XD thats jokes..i like it :P
o, and what kind of competitive dance do you do? cause i think thats pretty cool...
I'm Shelby.