OliveJuice / Comments

Lol! Sorry for such a late response (if it's late, I didn't check). I hardly come on anymore. But yeah, the poem was funny in my opinion.

Thanks for the comment on Secrets, I wrote that like, a year ago, and only put it on here about two months ago. Copy and paste. I do my storys on microsoft mainly now, not for the sequal of Secrets, but for the others. :) thanks!

Thanks! The only critisism for either one is hat the reader didn't like the name I chose.

Hey, I read the comment you left on 'When Theres No Hope', and was wondering if you could read my story, and leave some constructive criticism? My story is Secrets, which is completed, and it's sequal A Popstar's Kids, which only has 4 chapters, and one that I'm getting ready to start. Thank you:)
~Dusty~

No prob! ^_^

lol and thanks for the peom comment. I love it. And I actually did write it because I saw how most believe whatever they are told and that kinda frustrates(sp?) me lol XD

So I have to talk to Laya huh? *strokes chin in deep thought* gotta invent a device to talk to story characters! lol XD

No prob!! i love the story! Well let's see.....i don't know what should happen. lol but you're awesome so whatever happens will be awesome! XD but....let her be with Aiden lol

Thank you so much for your comment on When There's No Hope. Yeah with Travis or Ice it's kind of vague, but I have a flash back or memory of them before later in the story, so don't worry, you'll get the point, and as for her parents, that's a good idea. Thank you! =) <3

I shall get to reading your stories tomorrow.
I did not get to them the other day and today was Mommy Day (:

I have no idea what your new story is about, but I liked the first chapter

you know what?! i will :D they'll be partial credit for my poetry....somehow..haha idk. and tomorrow I'm reading yours :) i added some new ones too

haha that's totally cool, meeting new people is always nice, and thank you for the compliments :) it's late but when i get the chance i'm so reading your poems,
and it's my uncles dog, my dogs (Roxy: shepperd mixed with a jumping dog lol idk, and Lacy: chochlate lab) they're wayyyyyyyyyyyy cuter :)

writeee moree you know i alwaysss love your storiess remember how i kept pestering you for more on the road to somewhere i wont do that again but write more lol

Thank you very much! I have deleted the extra chapter :) Thanks for reading my story.

LOL. It was worth a try though. Not many people do try. Im tired too, got woken up because my sisters hve school even though I dont LOL.

Hey. Thanks for guessing on my Guess the song thing.
Sorry but its not LOL. Its a Taylor Swift song :]

lol, thanks for the comment for Video Girl!! :D it's been so much fun, seriously. And as soon as I get three more comments, then I"ll be updating. :D heh
thanks again!!

Thank you =)
You sound cool too =P

*Late reply*
Not much with me. Watching Two and a Half Men, replying to comments and hoping to get some reading and story planning done tonight. xD