Quetzalcoatl. / Comments

:O now THAT is blasphemy...I shall spread your word around like wild fire.

Haha, no problems. It was totally worth a comment XD And hahaha, that's good to know. Yeah, definitely got the hint of a Catholic, but it was just so well written it sounded it came straight from a memory, which always makes the best stories :)

Holy crap! Heidi~ I havent' talked to you forlike ever. whats up?

Hahaha, a lady brought coffee at Starbucks? That sounds like good karma to me- what did you do?
I've started up two more stories which hopefully people will flock to.
My girlfriend also broke up wit me today though, it was one of those hilarious break ups that you still laugh about hours afterwards even though she is infuriated with you.
Sometimes I don't get women.

I think I died Thursday? Something happened because I didn't eat but I know I worked, slept, went to school and to the dentist but that was it.
What a day.
Luckily there is a three-day weekend and I can write, work, sleep, write, and sleep. That girl that purposed to me, she came to my work today and did it again in front of my boss and three customers...
It was embarrassing to say the least.
Please tell me you've better days?

I flipped out! Because this girl purposed to me then my ex-girlfriend had her baby and I went to go cushion her blow and I just had a shit-day and I had to work as well so, I missed the whole day of school- lied to my parents and just told them something about them being canceled?
I don't know, ahha. I'm such a worry-wort. Geeze.

Sweet! I looked at being a concert planner which is an event planner that specializes in concerts and that general area. The whole career interests me a lot.
Have you ever skipped a day of classes? I did that today..

Hahaha, wow it's the site that almost as useful as google.
What do you know about event management?

Damn, youtube really does have everything, doesn't it? I'm surprised people haven't gotten their law degree from the site yet.

That's awesome! My school doesn't offer anything in particular dancing but I'm sure the gym on campus does because it has pilates.
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A belly dancing class? I'm guessing it pays off in the end?
Someone referred me to pilates and that shit kicks my ass everyday but my legs and butt look very shape-ly. Haha.

I honestly love your advice, thank you so much. You've made me reconsider my goals for college today and made me realize how fucking stupid I was for pushing myself into some things that I hated.
=]

NOTHING at all is bad about living with your parents accept for the fact tat I can't bring girlfriends home and all my money goes towards expenses they won't pay for.
Hahaha and the old guy plan- sounds good because I'd get a life insurance policy.
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Haha,I definitely feel poor right about now. I can't even afford my next semester of college, books killed me, and gas plus car insurance is a bitch and a half to cover. I even live with my parents right now which is the crazier part about it.
The reasons I think they want me to marry a man, especially a Jewish man is due to the reasons that one; are family is Jewish, two; there are some large trust funds from my grandmother that died in it for me but her stipulation was that I marry a Jewish man in an orthodox ceremony. I guess that makes them gold-diggers, huh?
If only...

That's wonderful! Unfortunately for me, I come from a family that's not only homophobic but thinks I should marry myself off to some rich guy and also peruse a career in becoming a doctor, lawyer, or CEO is some cum-guzzling company.
And I have no clue how to separate myself from that idea of going into a career that I'm actually happy with rather than just being successful. Luckily though, I learned to separate myself from their homophobic ways when I was thirteen and come out to them; haha, but they still- being the bastards they were raised, are trying to marry me off to rich Jewish men.
Oh, the woes of life, right?
Haha. :]

Art history? How wonderful, honestly I've been questioning myself for a while as to why I was in college. There are so many things I want to be but living and earning money with my talents and the things I love is the problem and unfortunately, I'm finding that only 1 in about 890,000 are the next Stephen King or Danielle Steele.
Luckily I keep sane and my materialistic woes do not distract me.
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Thank you so much for you comment, you have no clue exactly how much it means to me to have someone actually pay attention to the literary aspects of my writing, content of the story, and not have any previous knowledge/ story interference at the same time.
I'm going to college to become a teacher of creative writing and in my free time I am a freelance writer and I never know how well my points come across until I get criticism such as yours.
Thank you, again so much.
-Lungs.

[b]CONGRATULATIONS[/b]

- You one first place in the Frerard Contest!

Let me know what you want your three-shot to be about, and remember - you have a link to your profile on my signature - let me know what stories you want me to advertise as well. : )

Thanks for entering and posting your entry - I really, really enjoyed it.

xx

hey Heidi, how are you?
Rinni

Just wanted to give you a giant thank you for the comment on my story. I really appreciate it. :D