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Yeah, I know what you mean.
Anyway, Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you like it!!

Well thank you! :D I'm glad you like it so far!

Hey, not sure if you remember me...Sorry, it takes me forever to reply to comments. I'm horrible at it, mostly because I go MIA from here a lot.

But thank you for fixing your formatting. I haven't gotten around to reading your story just yet, but I will. I always try to give everything a fair chance, but I have a soft spot for original fiction. I will be back, promise. I just have to work through some more stuff on this site before I can give your story my full attention =]

I hope you're doing well.

Thank you!! It's much better now!
I read what you have so far for your other story as well, and I say it's starting off really well. (:

Mainly because it's just so much easier to get to a said persons profile when you add them; it's easier to get to their stories.

Which is the other reason I sent the request. Your story, Playing For Keeps, interest me, and I'd like to be able to get to it easier so as to finish reading it.

Also, it would be lovely if you would fix the paragraphs. I'm dislexic so I have trouble reading things normally anyway, and having to jump down every sentence makes understanding a wee bit harder.

All-in-all, I like you story. (:

So I decided I'd give your story, Playing for Keeps, a shot. It sounded like there was a lot of potential...But I can't read it the way it is. I'm sorry. That structure for the text is just horrendous. It makes it all disjointed and difficult to read. I'm not saying keep it all into one giant block of text (because that's even worse), but I'm suggesting that you edit it so that it looks like regular paragraphs.

I was going to leave this in the story forum, but I figured that having something negative as the first comment isn't exactly desirable...you know? Especially if you choose not to change it. Then the first thing anyone would ever see when they clicked on your story would be something negative. That's just not a good omen.

If you happen to decide to change it, let me know and I'd love to swing by and give it a read and critique. Good luck.

...and i meant dear, haha.

thank you for the story comment my deasr <3 :)

That's alright. We're all a little odd, are we not?
But I get what you're saying.

What's so nasty about pregnant people?

You should. : p
Is it weird that my favorite show is 16 and Pregnent? That's what I'm watching right now.

Congrats! You're my first friend on here. Lol.
Well maybe I'll end up writing. It's kinda sounds fun.

Pretty good. I don't write, just read. I'm too messed up in the head to get a story written out. haha.

So how are you today?

Thanks for the welcome, Brook. : D I'm Keegan. Nice to meet you.

http://stalkerazzi-liebe.webs.com/layouts.htm - i made a Jack Barakat layout i posted it on my site you can go check it out :)

I'm sorry, but I deleted all of my old old layouts.
I have no more layouts due to people stealing, altering and so on.

Haha, yeah. That interview is amazing.

Not too much with me. Replying to comments, trying to finish a story for a contest that ends tomorrow, watching House of Payne/Clean House, reading stories, and hoping to finish some mangas tonight. xD

Hey, welcome
I'm Kelsey
What's up?