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  • BlueLips-and-DoeEyes

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    Yayy! I hope you like it. :)
    January 19th, 2010 at 05:06am
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    Hey! I told you that when i started a new story i would tell you, well i did. It's called Breakdown. I hope you read and enjoy! :)
    January 11th, 2010 at 01:55am
  • Throw.My.Faith

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    I'm glad you like it. If I wasn't half asleep right now I would try writing more just because that comment help boost me to want to update quicker =D
    January 6th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • x.Kris.x

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    Hi sweetie, hope you're having a good start to the new year <3
    January 5th, 2010 at 04:20pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    Hahaha I can't keep Batter Blaster out for too long. It's tradition!
    She may or may not be spilling the beans to Mom and Grandma later. ;)
    And I'm hoping to get chapter 2 of Afire out tonight, so look out! :D
    January 5th, 2010 at 05:37am
  • BlueLips-and-DoeEyes

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    Haha. Goodnight. :)
    January 4th, 2010 at 10:04am
  • BlueLips-and-DoeEyes

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    Well, when i get some inspiration and an idea, which a few have been floating around my head lately, i'll comment you and tell you when i've got one going. You deserve some special treatment. Haha.
    January 4th, 2010 at 09:52am
  • BlueLips-and-DoeEyes

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    I definitely will. I really appreciate you commenting my story. I really can't thank you enough. :)
    January 4th, 2010 at 09:44am
  • BlueLips-and-DoeEyes

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    Woww! Now you're reading my other story! I love you. You are my new favorite person in the whole wide world. :) And it even seems like you like it. Thank you sooo much! :))
    January 4th, 2010 at 09:35am
  • BlueLips-and-DoeEyes

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    Awwww. The fact that you are reading my story and actually like it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I think people stop reading after a while because my beginnings are kind of slow. :( Thanks you sooo much for commenting i was really starting to get discouraged aboout the whole thing. I wasn't even sure if i was going to be posting the rest of the story. You really made me happy inside. Thank you sooo much! :) You made me feel like i don't suck at writing. I might even right a third story, about who, i don't know, but i will. Thank you. :))
    January 4th, 2010 at 09:30am
  • formerlyknownas

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    See normally reading into things when I write isn't really necessary, but then I'll put in little hints of things here and there. It makes it more fun for me haha. But yes, Schuyler and Hummingbird have changed a lot, and in a really short amount of time. It's just a part of them growing up. And they'll still be the same sometimes, like obviously they haven't changed that much, but they're growing up. I think their relationship is just as important as Garrett and Hummingbird's relationship, I'm really big on writing things with her family as well as things with him because it's all important to her, you know?

    Yes they are together, but he didn't [i]quite[/i] apologize. At least not for real. He made a point of telling her that he won't be doing that anymore. Also, I didn't want her to just accept it and have it all be okay, she has doubts. Everyone would have doubts, especially since it's so sudden. And her brain turning to mush, haha that happens to me. Boys turn my brain to mush all the time.

    Haha that's exactly how it is for him with her. But he's seen her at her worst, in every state she could be in, so obviously he doesn't care. Plus, when you want someone that bad, you just don't give a crap what they look like haha. And I think a big part of him being so sincere is how nervous he was haha.

    I'm glad you find it so realistic, haha, that's my goal when I write. I'm all flattered and stuff. :D
    The Tommy story is going to be up soon. I think you're going to like it, it's very intense-ish, haha.
    December 31st, 2009 at 06:27pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    Haha well I'm glad you liked the update! :)
    I'm really excited to write the short story, I've already started working on it.

    And I won the bet! She bought me a pair of gorgeousssss black leather boots from Bakers, I was super stoked haha. Thanks for asking! :D
    December 31st, 2009 at 04:08am
  • formerlyknownas

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    Haha isn't he such a jerk? I'm glad you liked the update!
    I'm going to start the next chapter soon, but I've got a ten-books-in-two-weeks bet going with my mom and MONEY IS ON THE LINE. Trés importante.
    December 20th, 2009 at 05:27pm
  • x.Kris.x

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    Damn, I'm jealous. I've come to the conclusion though, if you work in retail, you never have time to buy Christmas gifts. I've pretty much been working non-stop. We -- along with every other retail story I know -- have what is called "black out dates" where we can't book time off of work because they need everyone. And you guessed it, it's during the month of December. So it really sucks in that sense. I think I'm just going to buy everyone stuff from my store hahaha. How lame would that be?

    What are your plans for the holidays?
    December 18th, 2009 at 05:13am
  • x.Kris.x

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    Haha, I'm glad. I say Merry Christmas to everyone, but then some people get all upset and shit. Seriously though, being politically correct is such a stupid concept.

    I live in Canada, so I encounter that bullshit all the time. It's so goddamn annoying. Do we make people say "Happy Holidays" on Roshashauna or Dwali? Ugh...Sorry, this is something that irks me to no end, so sorry for the rant.

    But Merry Christmas! LOL I haven't even started my christmas shopping yet...>__<
    December 17th, 2009 at 07:32am
  • x.Kris.x

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    Hey girlie,
    Glad to know things with your friends have settled down; and you made a great new friend! That's always fantastic. I'm really happy for you. So the chaos has settled, huh? Awesome. Just in time for the holidays too. In case I don't get on before then, Merry Christmas!

    I just realized that I don't know if you celebrate it...
    December 17th, 2009 at 05:32am
  • outthewindow.

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    Your favorite?
    Girl you just made my day, week, maybe even month!
    But that depends on what I get for Christmas.
    Haha.
    Thankies for the comment!
    December 16th, 2009 at 04:29am
  • formerlyknownas

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    Hahaha I told you, I don't disappoint when it comes to the dramz.
    Personally, I just find everything more interesting when everyone is distraught lol, I'm so awful.
    But don't worry, it won't last forever. ;)

    As for Garrett, he's so mad because he's a prissy betch. He's a drama queen, lol.
    But you've learned that about him already, haven't you?
    And Schuyler didn't mean to be a shit disturber for once. It just worked out that way, as she was trying to be a good sister.
    I'm glad you noticed that. :)
    December 13th, 2009 at 10:37pm
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    I'm glad you like the layout! Did you notice the hummingbirds? Haha, soooo clever.

    Haha you may or may not need to worry about Schuyler, idk. ;)
    I was hoping that the last few chapters might throw you for a loop. Just wait until 26. I feel like I keep saying that, haha but I have a reason.
    I just keep getting all these ideas!
    December 12th, 2009 at 08:24am
  • formerlyknownas

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    Aww thank you! I'm so excited, I actually did it myself haha. It took me, like, two hours this morning.
    December 6th, 2009 at 07:55am