August 4th, 2009 at 10:26pm
lyrical_lies. / Comments
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Well thank you! :D I'm glad you like it so far!August 4th, 2009 at 08:50pm
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Hey, not sure if you remember me...Sorry, it takes me forever to reply to comments. I'm horrible at it, mostly because I go MIA from here a lot.
But thank you for fixing your formatting. I haven't gotten around to reading your story just yet, but I will. I always try to give everything a fair chance, but I have a soft spot for original fiction. I will be back, promise. I just have to work through some more stuff on this site before I can give your story my full attention =]
I hope you're doing well.August 4th, 2009 at 07:43am -
Thank you!! It's much better now!
I read what you have so far for your other story as well, and I say it's starting off really well. (:July 18th, 2009 at 05:13pm -
Mainly because it's just so much easier to get to a said persons profile when you add them; it's easier to get to their stories.
Which is the other reason I sent the request. Your story, Playing For Keeps, interest me, and I'd like to be able to get to it easier so as to finish reading it.
Also, it would be lovely if you would fix the paragraphs. I'm dislexic so I have trouble reading things normally anyway, and having to jump down every sentence makes understanding a wee bit harder.
All-in-all, I like you story. (:July 18th, 2009 at 07:35am -
So I decided I'd give your story, Playing for Keeps, a shot. It sounded like there was a lot of potential...But I can't read it the way it is. I'm sorry. That structure for the text is just horrendous. It makes it all disjointed and difficult to read. I'm not saying keep it all into one giant block of text (because that's even worse), but I'm suggesting that you edit it so that it looks like regular paragraphs.
I was going to leave this in the story forum, but I figured that having something negative as the first comment isn't exactly desirable...you know? Especially if you choose not to change it. Then the first thing anyone would ever see when they clicked on your story would be something negative. That's just not a good omen.
If you happen to decide to change it, let me know and I'd love to swing by and give it a read and critique. Good luck.July 17th, 2009 at 06:17am -
...and i meant dear, haha.July 16th, 2009 at 12:59am
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thank you for the story comment my deasr <3 :)July 16th, 2009 at 12:59am
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That's alright. We're all a little odd, are we not?
But I get what you're saying.July 15th, 2009 at 04:00am -
What's so nasty about pregnant people?July 15th, 2009 at 03:53am
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You should. : p
Is it weird that my favorite show is 16 and Pregnent? That's what I'm watching right now.July 15th, 2009 at 03:42am -
Congrats! You're my first friend on here. Lol.
Well maybe I'll end up writing. It's kinda sounds fun.July 15th, 2009 at 03:32am -
Pretty good. I don't write, just read. I'm too messed up in the head to get a story written out. haha.July 15th, 2009 at 03:24am
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So how are you today?July 15th, 2009 at 03:21am
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Thanks for the welcome, Brook. : D I'm Keegan. Nice to meet you.July 15th, 2009 at 03:17am
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http://stalkerazzi-liebe.webs.com/layouts.htm - i made a Jack Barakat layout i posted it on my site you can go check it out :)July 2nd, 2009 at 09:59am
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I'm sorry, but I deleted all of my old old layouts.
I have no more layouts due to people stealing, altering and so on.June 29th, 2009 at 08:19pm -
Haha, yeah. That interview is amazing.June 27th, 2009 at 05:00am
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Not too much with me. Replying to comments, trying to finish a story for a contest that ends tomorrow, watching House of Payne/Clean House, reading stories, and hoping to finish some mangas tonight. xDFebruary 12th, 2009 at 03:19am
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Hey, welcome
I'm Kelsey
What's up?February 7th, 2009 at 05:50pm
Anyway, Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you like it!!