it was never meant to be anything other than costructive critisism...i hate it when ppl are mean about stuff, and EVERYONE has room for improvement...so...i do my best to help out haha.
HAHA, i could never hate somthing... you said this was your first..story story right? well, it was a really great..intro i guess, but on the next chapter, be specific, don't rush it. I love detail, but not everyone does... ppl wonder why it takes me so long to update...i check every detail. or try to atleast...like this next chapter...extremely important!!!
MTOL
And the anime girls are both listening to music, and kinda writing..mine has a computer, and yours has a pen! haha, and my name is kelci.. I got the first comment!! haha
MTOL
lol yeah, my friend showed it to me and i was like eep! i love it!
and i adore guys with accents. australian and british are my absolute faves, with irish right behind =)
thanks. i started to try a vampire story, but they're kinda complicated. you know, you could make up the principles or you could do it based on fact, but it all gets hard. and i dont really like it when they stray away from the origional, deadly, suck-your-blood, burn in the sun kind of vampires. twilight, sparkle in the sun, WTF?!?!?!?!?!
anyway, the stories im starting are more fun for me and then some are serious, but i dont really know where im going with all of them yet so...ya you'll just hafta wait like everyone else =P
awww those are cute names. i really like nate and cam. do you think noah's a cute name? i think its a cute name.i also like william and gabriel and...uh...i forget the others.
anyway, i just needed some names for some story ideas im trying out =)
that sucks.
i stole my brothers ipod and re-named all his playlists. one was 'i love men' and another was 'jonas brothers > master chief' (cuz he plays halo a lot)
aw his face when he saw that was funneh, teehee
star wars ftw!!!
i hate school. please dont remind me of it. lol
i gotta spend 6 hours updating and editing my ipod now, cuz im obsessed like that. k ttyl =P