That chapter wasn't that good in my op :P But I'm glad you think it was okay :) Hayden is soo mean..he does something that pratically kills Calayah soon...not physically. emotionally *heheheh*
:) I love her attitude as well, she can be so rebellious but she can change at the drop of a hat. She fits into the story perfectly, I couldn't imagine her being any other way.
:D I love James, in my rough draft he is not so sweet but rather annoying. I just had to change that :D I like discussing the plot as well :D You are a reader , what do you think of Calayah?
I know :D isn't he just simply adorable! I just loved him as soon as I thought of him , in the rough draft he isn't this sweet. screw the rough draft!!!! lol!
Somewhat like that, he does have a backstory that explains why he does what he does. He sends chills up my spine too :D My rough draft is the finished story of One Black Wish and there are worse things in there...
There was no comments because I had to delete it and change the names of people because I didn't like the names I used in 8th grade XD
Thank you for the comment and I shall update sooner.
Ask people to read and comment for me please?
It'll help me update teh story more~! -^_^-
hey :\
Can you actually believe he died? T_T
I just about bawled my eyes out since I learned it. the only moment I wasn't is when I was sleeping.
fuck it. god is selfish, you know?
he took jimbo as a drummer.
at 29.
he took kurt cobain as a guitarist.
at 27.
he took sid vicious as a bassist.
at about 27.
and he took janis jopplin as a singer.
at 27.
yay! he's got a rock band now.
but what those that leave us with?
:'(