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  • Roden.

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    I'm trying to not give every character too much detail, I think. I kind of see that there's a lot of them and even I messed up a few things writing their problems or whatever. I think focusing on the main people (Ava, Ian, Tessa, and Alex), is better than every single side character.

    That doesn't make sense -_-
    February 1st, 2011 at 05:47pm
  • Roden.

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    I seem to have a habit of adding too much detail at once, at least that was what someone told me with one of my stories. They said I over-described.
    February 1st, 2011 at 04:21am
  • Roden.

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    Well, what are you confused about? I can try and clear it up.
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:54pm
  • thegreatestseth

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    Hey & Pizza:)
    January 25th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • Pikachu-Girl

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    Thanks for the poem comment... I know it is..... Why thank you....
    January 24th, 2011 at 08:38am
  • Cobain.

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    Thanks for the journal comment. (:
    The lady I work with is fine! :D
    And as for camera guy...well, we'll see, hehe.
    January 15th, 2011 at 05:53pm
  • Meru21

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    Thanks for commenting on "New". I'm soooooo glad Cade is your fave!!! Yay! ^^ You'll see if he dies or not in the last chapter.
    January 15th, 2011 at 04:47pm
  • Meru21

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    Yay! Vote for Cade. I'm glad you like my story "New". And yeah, I know the whole everyone-in-love with the main girl is old, but not everyone is in love with her. Just a few people. And it happens when you meet someone totally different than what you view as the "norm". it's basic psychology, and happens more often than you think. But, trust me, by the end of the story, you'll figure out that not everyone loves her in the way they think. ^^
    Yes, I know the twins are cruel. They're meant to be. ^^
    November 15th, 2010 at 09:44am
  • Maximan:P

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    damn. i still got to do that...
    August 18th, 2010 at 07:04am
  • Maximan:P

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    yeah. so whats up?
    August 15th, 2010 at 09:08pm
  • Maximan:P

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    O.O well thats very lucky. I got up to like ten dollars lol
    August 14th, 2010 at 08:20pm
  • JessicamadeyeMoody

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    Man, I hate it when I have some witty remark but then I forget it... So I'm just left with an explanation of losing a witty remark...
    August 14th, 2010 at 07:31pm
  • JessicamadeyeMoody

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    ahahaha, really??
    I didn't realize how relieving that was.
    August 14th, 2010 at 07:29am
  • Maximan:P

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    thats cool. im just counting change i found. lol
    August 14th, 2010 at 05:40am
  • Maximan:P

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    nothing. im pretty bored. what about you?
    August 14th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • JessicamadeyeMoody

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    Really??
    O.O
    What gave me away??
    August 14th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • JessicamadeyeMoody

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    ahaha, total opposite of me. XD
    August 13th, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • Maximan:P

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    damn that sucks. well at least tennis is fun :)
    August 13th, 2010 at 08:12pm
  • Maximan:P

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    i am...tired lol. what about you?
    and i agree. it is rediculously hot
    August 13th, 2010 at 06:19am
  • JessicamadeyeMoody

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    Ahaha, its not depressing!!
    I don't believe in the whole "he's the one" thing. I just want to enjoy life and if that means never settling down with one person... then, I'm not complaining :D
    August 13th, 2010 at 05:46am