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Of course; it was too good not to comment
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You are welcome for the comment. Feel free to check out one of my poems if you have the time :)

Sweet :) how is that going?

Yeah its all good now I just. Had a freak out moment lol. So what have you been up to?

Not much, dealing with other peoples drama. Its really starting to bug me though, i just want to shove it all back down their throats and tell them to leave me be for a while =/

So, erm, here's the 'criticism; you wanted in all of its glory.

I've always known that you're a very expressive poet, but you don't need to use incredibly obscure words. Having to look all of them up is pretty tiring and can make your readers go tl;dr (too long; didn't read). It's also nice that you do free verse, since the whole making poems rhyme thing can be pretty boring and redundant. Just be careful with your spelling, punctuation and capitalization. Always remember that grammar Nazis are everywhere and they will retaliate :)

Hey not much, you?

Yeah. Sure thing.

thanks for the comment on the butterfly quatrains. have you heard of the butterfly project?

Thanks for the poem comment. And L is awesome <3

Thanks for commenting on Marionettes! :)

Thank you for the comment on Acoustic, much appreciated

Thank youuu for the poem comment! (:

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Okay. I'm done.

No problem, I REALLY liked it.

its going really great. :)
how about for you?

thnx for the poem comment!!! :D

welcome :)

Seriously lol. whatcha been up to?