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Thanks so much for the story comment! I'm glad you like it, and thank you for telling me about my repetition. I know I do that a lot. It's something I definitely need to work on. ha The next chapter is going to be written by my friend, Tori. It's gonna be in Jersey's POV and it's gonna take place in the next day. It's gonna be great! I can't wait until it's posted! :D haha

Thanks for your comment on 'Darkest Before the Dawn'! I really appreciate it.

that is literally exactly what I mean!!!! its basically them taking a helpful comment and freaking out just because it doesn't say "OMG I LUV UR STORY!!"

You're welcome :)

Like I said, I have such a nack for doing it too. I'm constantly telling everyone to tell me where to go back and fix it! I'm glad I was some sort of help...kinda :p

you don't, don't worry! :-)
and omg that annoys me so much!! when people ASK for constructive criticism, adn they GET it and then they freak out! like what the heck?! I can understand if they freak out if someone's being mean but if someone's politely giving you pointers on how to make your story better and you freak out, just.... NO. that is a huuuuge pet peeve of mine!

you know, when I first wrote that I had a small, nagging feeling that I did write her name a few too many times.. I'll go back in and revise! and don't worry at all; you have CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, which I love, and not BITCHY criticism, which I do NOT love.
thanks!!! :-)

omg, THANK YOU. THAT'S what I couldn't pinpoint while I was writing the story!!! I was like "hmm.. I feel like I've used the word wrong somewhere.... but WHERE?!" hahah! thanks so much lol!

That's what I thought. Then just the detail part. I like it so far. :)

hey, thanks so much for the comment on my story! and thanks for giving me constructive criticism without being rude about it, that tends to happen a lot! I'll definitely reword some things in my story, so thanks so much! one thing I wanted to say though, I used the word "ready" a lot on purpose, because I kind of wanted it to seem that Cato was repeating to himself, you know what I mean? but thanks so much for your feedback, I'm going back into my story tonight to revise! :-)

I think all my teachers curved their exams! :)

He curved it because everyone did terrible! People got tons of C's, but I got an A, which makes me excited! :D

I just about cried of happiness two seconds ago. I got 113% on my Chemisty exam!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just about died.

We usually have 7 classes a day, next year we will have 8 classes a day. I maintain all A's because it's important to me.

What kind of grades do you get?

Oh here we can quit school at 16, but you can't go onto college or anything.

Like grade level. Which is rather small for around here.

I still have 2 years left. :( I hate my school, so it feels more like 4 years to go. It's too small for me. In my class we only have 80 some kids.

Alright. You excited for your last year of school?

Oh, I see. What grade are you in? I'm a Junior now that I'm out of school I guess :)