Ellie-phant / Comments

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Awesome, definitely super excited. I'm very interested at how it's going to start, and if Emma is going to be in it. Naturally, my mind goes to a love triangle of some sort, but I can't figure out how it would exactly play out. Anyway, really pumped! And take your time! When I wrote stories, everyone would scream for updates, and it would really stress me out, so I don't want you to feel over worked. Hah.(: Anyway, good luck on the next chapters!

Ha, I thought about it, but then the main page would be sooooo long! And don't worry, I won't take months to get out the first part. I'm working on the third chapter right now, so once that's finished, I'll post the first one.

I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed 'Suffer' so much, and I will try my hardest to not let you down with this one!

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Haha, I would never! I'm glad I made you smile. I knew for a great sequel, something bad has to happen at the end, so i understand. I just hope you are able to not leave too long of a cliff hanger. (: Sometimes, someone will take months before the start a sequel. Makes me kinda sad, but I'll be bright eyed, waiting for arrival. (: I don't know if you've thought about it yet, but the last chapter, you should make the sequel's main page. S everyone can start subscribing to it, even if there isn't a chapter out yet. (:

Your comments made me smile soooo much! Thank you, really, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy to know that you like my writing that much.

But unfortunately, he won't be saying anything to her that you want him to. Now I just hope you don't hate me after the next chapter.... that's when you get to see everything come crashing down! Killian will end up leaving her, but there is a sequel, so there's no reason to come at me with a switchblade.

I hope I don't disappoint with it.

@ Your.Desi.Girl
I'm definitely sad to see it end, but excited for the sequel. I don't think you give yourself enough credit, this story really is quite wonderful.

I've got maybe 2 chapters left and then the sequel will arrive. I didn't want to mash everything into one story, so I figured I would just split it in two... and the break in the story works well with a sequel, too.

@ Your.Desi.Girl
I sort of saw that coming, strictly knowing the storyline. I personally think what you're doing with the story is great. Do you know how many chapters you plan on having in this story? Or if there will be a sequel?

As much as I don't want to get rid of Bae, I have to. I'm already bending the script so it fits for this; I can't completely disregard the show's storyline like that... even thought I kinda wish I could...

But Amira will see Bae again, don't worry.

Up next, Bae ends up leaving with the Lost Boys [as per the show] and Amira gets to meet the "King" of Neverland. Then Killian explains why he gave up Bae to Pan. I'll get more up most likely tomorrow!

So happy to hear that you approved of the fluff!

And yes, Bae is being very protective of her, but can you blame him? He was told that a pirate killed his mother and that they can't be trusted, etc.... but that's all leading up to what's going to be the sequel to this. All of Bae's warnings are kind of like a foreshadowing, even though he won't be the one saying, "I told you so" when it does happen.

Up next, he asks Amira for advice when Bae tells him about his dad being the Dark One and how the dagger is the key to killing him, as well as Bae finding the picture of Milah and wanting off the ship [basically what happened in And Straight On 'Til Morning].

Updating right now!

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Awesome! I'm checking it out right now. I love the way you the story into yours. It's wonderful.

Yay, glad that you liked it!

I'm not going to change much of what happens in the Once storyline with Bae and Hook. He does start getting along with him, then find the picture, gets mad, storms off and gets captured by the Lost Boys... but the add in part is how Amira fits into it all and how she starts to care about Bae like a little brother.

I'll get the next chapter up either later today or tomorrow!

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Oh, he's adorable. He's trying to talk, but all that comes out is, "A goo goo!"

Ah! I'm so excited! I'll check it out right now. (:

Awwww, a 4-month-old sounds so adorable! I was home for the holiday time, but now that I'm back at my apartment and such, updates will be back to normal... Next one going up right now!

@ Your.Desi.Girl
I remember reading it, and loving it so much. Plus, who doesn't love Frank? <3

Ah! I'm so excited. I've been checking every so often, because honestly, I'm a house wife with a 4 month old. There isn't much else I do besides read Hah.

Aw, you just totally made my day! I'm so glad that you like my writing so much! And I'm happy to hear that I'm still able to write to entertain two years later. Now I just have to make sure that I keep it up and don't let you down!

Next chapter he's going to tell her about Pan and why he's being so overprotective with her, as well as giving her a little confession... I'll try to get it up in the next few days!

@ Your.Desi.Girl
Right?! I know I wouldn't. He's just so... perfect.
Oh, I'm so excited! I'll go check it out now. (:

I know what you mean! He's totally going to win her over... I mean, he has to, right? He's Hook... how do you resist him? He's just so.... hot. Ha.

And I'm so glad to know that you're enjoying to story!

The next chapter is Amira exploring the island a little. But they also start fighting because obviously Hook knows the island better than any of them. He wants to keep her safe, she thinks he's being overbearing with his testosterone, etc... going up right now!

Thanks for the photo comments.

D'aw! Those all sound so cute!

Ehehe, I'd rather not say it in such a public place like this, but I'll be okay c:

New tattoos? What did you get?
There really hasn't been much new going on for me, I have surgery tomorrow which I'm really looking forward to, got accepted into my college class thing for next year and I finally have a steady group of friends.
Other than that... Really not much going on but things are good so I can't really complain c: