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Sorry to bother but would you mind reading this and letting me know what you think?(:

http://stories.mibba.com/read/434951/Depression/

First I have to say what the heck is wrong with your page... second why didn't you tell about your other stories? I am beary hurt I am supposed to be the one who gets to read for mistakes before you post it. Also I had really come on here to say that you need to update foolishly into you and pm but looks like you dont want my help. I am a very sad editor right now. =[

Hey Krys! (: haha Happy Easter, dear.

Haha, yeah. Now, it's 11:45 pm. Haha I live in Ohio. Where do you live? And oh my gosh, I can't stop listening to Nick. It's all I've been listening to lately. I love him. The pictures made my day. I have a billion of them on my iPod. Hehe he is my background <3 His pictures actually caused me to change the beginning of my newest chapter to Foolishly, I Fall. Haha it was a good beginning (: haha. I want to meet Nick Jonas. It's one of my dreams. Haha oh, and I've also been listening to old school Jonas. I miss those days, but I love how they're growing up. Do you ever find yourself going on YouTube and watching all of the older videos of them? I love that. Haha

Haha, oh my goodness. It's fine. I'm hyper too. My mom made brownies at 9 o'clock at night so...haha it's understandable. And I would love to help you. We can take this to a private message that way we can keep our ideas just between us. Haha I'm excited I get to help you. (: I get to contribute to one of my favorite stories. I'm honored! Haha and thank you for that comment, dear. I get that motherly/caring nature from my mother. I use it all of the time.

I lost my grandfather yesterday

Oh, no problem! Haha It's one of my favorites. and don't worry about updating! Do it when you can, dear. I'm just excited you've decided to do the sequel. And maybe if you'd like, I could give you some ideas with what to do with Jaina and Nick. I would love to help, if you want of course and don't mind. I love thinking of those types of situations for my own stories. haha, so just let me know, dear. (:

I'm glad they're doing good. Aw why?

I know but he's just stubborn, which doesn't work out because I am as well. I know, but breakfast nauseates me and sleep just doesnt come to me.

Oh my gosh, no problem! Ahaha, I totally understand. And I'm the same way about my writing but you really are amazing. Oh, I'm so happy you decided to do the sequel. I can't wait. You have to let me know as soon as you update (: and yes, Jaina is one of my favorite characters!

Talk about late replies! I am sorry, as well. School has been extra hard last three days before spring break, so I had to study a lot. It paid off because I got an A in History, yay!

Layers, layers, layers. I think they make us all more interesting, you know? I mean if people were simple to understand, where would the fun be? Haha. I mean, I am quite sarcastic but in school I am never that way; most of the time I just sit back and act normal [which I am not, I have tumblr! I am among the awesomest people on Earth, hahaha] and just relax. I am always worried about how people in my class will interpret some of my sarcastic comments, so I refrain.
And yes… how did she get pregnant? It seems just a bit disturbing now that I look back on it. Hahaha.

Why can’t life be chocolate cakes, rainbows and smiles? I hate that it can’t be that way. So silly.

Guys are confusing. Like, when they are around each other, in their groups, they act much differently than when you get one of them alone. It’s funny in a way, yet annoying at the same time. It really annoys me sometimes. Like, why can’t they just be nice? It really isn’t that hard. Hahaha. And my school is hard as well, not Cambridge, but it’s horrible. I am expected to have As, mostly.

Nickley! What do you think? Nick + Riley = Nickley. Hahaha. I was thinking about the fact that their couple name could be Niley, which bugged me. Not original at all! And then I came up with Nickley, which sounds pretty awesome to me. So Nickley! Ha!

Of course Nick is perfect. �"le sigh- I love him so much! Gosh. His eyes, his hair, his voice, his nose, his smile, his lips, his neck, his arms, his butt [yes!], his back, his eyelashes, his … HIM. x)

Oh and I really want to focus on that change that is happening between the two of them. They cause those changes to one another and build themselves in a good way. I mean, it is easier to notice it about Riley because you see her thoughts, but Nick is changing as well. He is much nicer. Hahaha.
Awe… and she is one of your favourite characters on Mibba? That made my day! <3

My highschool life is teen TV show worthy. Wanna hear the story? Hahaha.

They will be together in SMM, but the best part comes in the sequel. Ha!
And I guess Europe will be nice. Mostly in the UK, though I am thinking of incorporating Venice and Italy a bit. Because I love Italy!

Gosh. Spring break dude!!! :D

Yeah we got into a huge fight because he does not wish to listen to what I say and I'm sick of being told that I'm always wrong. I am taking care of myself, but I have hardly been sleeping or eating.

School is fine, chemistry is going better but I just abhor geometry. How are you and your sisters?

OH! and your writing skills are absolutely amazing. Just saying (:

Nice to meet you, Krys (: haha and oh my gosh, no problem, dear. It really is one of my favorites. And I read a lot of them. 'Stained Converse' always stuck out in my head though. It was amazing, and you must continue 'Terrified' with what you gave us...you can't not finish. (well, you could but I don't think you will) haha Nick and Jaina are amazing characters.

Aw, thank you! I try to be original with my stories and sometimes it's well translated, while other times.... eh, not so much. Haha.

It's nice to meet you Krys! And aw, thanks! (: That's probably the only story I've carefully planned out, haha.

Hey. Thanks for the friend request! I'm Ashley (:

Heyyy! Thanks for the request. :) I'm Kim.

Nah. It's still weird. But I love the feeling of knowing that someone out there is liking the story and all. It makes me feel... nice. Like, all the time I put into writing is worth it. It is definitely an amazing feeling.

Everyone has layers and we all have secrets right? Even if we do seem as if we're happy I bet that mostly everyone who wears a smile still has some worries. That;s okay, though. Life wasn't designed to be easy, it is tough but getting through tough situations leads you to better times. It's about being strong and the prize that comes afterwards [totally using this in one story hahahaha].
Donkey has always been my favourite. He is so rad and I really love him, though I always wonder how the ef did the dragon get pregnant. Such a ... well. yes. Hahahaha.

Guys are usually mean, but it's because they think they have to be [deep inside]. My opinion is that society left that imprint and now it's there and it's hard to get rid of it. Hmmm... really. Yeah. And oh, Cambridge? : )

Nick is pretty determined. I mean, he knows what he wants he just has some things he needs to get ready first. He is too insecure about himself, don't know if you have noticed that actually. He is convinced that he won't amount to anything because he took a few wrong turns, but truth is... I think anyone can do anything at any point of their lives, if they try. That's one of the morals behind Nick's character.

Riley is growing. Most of my characters grow through stories. I mean, yeah. She is changing and I am glad that people have noticed. Her thoughts are becoming more complex, and yet it's easier to understand her. Also, she has becom a bit more upfront with people ever since she met Nick, Tony and the rest.

Oh, my high school life is full of drama ... you wouldn't believe it.

Well... eh, who cares you get insider info!
I have sequel planned out more or less. The point is they will get together in about a few chapters, but things will happen and that's how it will end [the first part]. I am not planning on telling people what happens in sequel, though. Not yet. I am not even going to release info about sequel, so shhhh. Hahaha.
Anyway... all I can say is that the sequel takes place in New York [first] and then Europe. And then back to US. x)

Hello, thank you for the request.
I'm Cecily! (: