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  • Earl Of Slander

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    yeah i know, that's the most i've written for one chapter though.
    the average is about 5 or 6.
    i couldn't believe it myself haha.

    because if i try to write that much on a normal basis, like you said, i'd over kill it also. i'd end up describing petty things like how many cracks were on the ceiling and there's an ant running across the dining room table or something lol.
    July 1st, 2009 at 08:31am
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    well, it was 12 pages long though, and the best part was it wasn't filled with a lot of dialog. like, nothing was said until about pg. 6 i think lol.
    and it was the first chapter, so there was a bunch of explaining needing to be done.

    shit, it's pretty rare if i can spend only 3 days on a chapter.
    again, you're really lucky.
    July 1st, 2009 at 08:23am
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    haha, weird...or [i]lucky[/i]?

    that's really cool man, i wish i was like that.
    i've spent two weeks on a chapter once, and it turned out to be better than the [i]Mona Lisa[/i] lol.
    July 1st, 2009 at 08:17am
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    yeah, this is actually the first time that i've done that. but it's deemed necessary, trust me. you'll see when you read it:)

    i know, that is a while away, but i'm pretty positive that i'll want to re-edit it, or at times, trash it all together because i'll think it's crap. takes me an eternity to create a chapter because i want it to be [i]really[/i] good.

    i've actually already tried to write something for it and it sucked:(

    plus, i say 4 days because i don't want you kicking my ass if i say 2 and it doesn't happen lmao. i'm sure i can reach this deadline.
    July 1st, 2009 at 08:00am
  • Earl Of Slander

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    hahaha, i like your logic!

    so have no fear, i've done the majority of my research, planned out a couple of chapters, so the new oli should be posted in about....4 days?
    maybe, we'll see what happens.

    maybe sooner!!! :D
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:54am
  • Earl Of Slander

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    oh geez, you're making my head big lol.
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:48am
  • Earl Of Slander

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    [b]YAY!!!!![/b]

    thank you!!!!!
    i'll do my best not to disappoint!!!!!!!
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:46am
  • Earl Of Slander

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    same here, so i feel that whenever i [b]do[/b] write from their perspective that they're potrayed as an estrogen-overloaded chick lol.
    it's a good feeling to know that you think i'm doing good though, so thanks again:)

    yes, the story is called [i]Jesus On the Dashboard[/i].
    i think i put a link to it at the end of the last chapter of tom, if you want to check it out :D
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:28am
  • Earl Of Slander

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    hell yeah, [b]NEW READER!!! :D[/b]

    and yes, i think i get what you're saying.

    thank you so much for the comment!!!
    it's kind of weird for me to write from that POV, but i couldn't see it any other way:)

    there will be more in the next week or two, i believe.
    trying to finish the first chapter of my new oli story!!!! :)
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:24am
  • formerlyknownas

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    Mind a long comment? I love long comments! Haha.
    I'm glad you enjoyed Gravity. It was seriously one of my favorites to write. But I try not to pick favorites. ;)
    As for Change, well, it's supposed to be frustrating. Haha. But hey, at least she's getting a little action from [i]someone[/i], right? Reise even has his own Team now, lmao.
    I'm glad you like it, though. Seriously. :D I love getting new readers, and hearing what they think. Thank you for commenting!
    June 28th, 2009 at 05:21am
  • LindaValo

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    yeah it will be great ^_^
    June 26th, 2009 at 09:09pm