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Thanks for the feedback! I've been wondering for awhile what I need to do :)

I'm just dropping by to say that you read my "I Am The Key", but I'm deleting it for the time being off of here so I can revise it and edit it freely in my spare time. I'll message you again when I put it back up, if you're still interested in it. Thanks for reading it, initially XD

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I really, really appreciate the time you took to read my story and write and honest critique. I hope your review site does well - it definitely deserves to! Have a great day, and thanks again. :)

Maz

[i]Okay, thanks
I'm just not very good with descriptions :\[/i]

okay thx u

I know this is late but thank you for the message. I fixed the errors that you mentioned and I did see what I did wrong. So thanks

I'd like to place my memory in your story.....pretty please?

Thank you very much for the comment on Sometimes. We actually have no idea where this story is headed, much less if it will be happy or sad. It's very by the mood when written. At least, that's what it's like for me. I cannot speak for Lia. Also, thank you for the tip. I will put that now.

I appreciated the comment, it did help. I did go back and change the couple of errors there were. I didn't really notice the past to present tense change but it was helpful. If you ever need anything let me know.

-Nana

Thanks for the advice..
I meant to do the descriptions but
I was running out of time. Lol
Anyways, thanks again! =]

Thanks for telling me what you think about I Am The Key.
Also, you mentioned that your least favorite part was the rambling? I just wanted to say that I don't really intend to keep it up for much longer. Right now I'm just trying to prove that she's changed, since the beginning is like a flashback.
Thanks again xP

Thanks so much :) I'm actually not that confident in my narrative voice, so this time I tried to change it up. Merci beaucoups :P

Thanks for the story comment..
and yes, there is alot of swearing.

but its just my problem with that, i cuss too much when im mad at something. And thats what Blaire is sorta based off, is my pissed off side.

Hey Deary,
I'm Kiaa.

I just wanted to say that you are an AMAZING writer!!!

i love your stuff :)

Thank you for your honest opinion! =) I've been thinking about changing the layout for awhile now; it does seem a little too much.

Thanks, I didn't think they were that hard to read but I guess it's because I have glasses that tend to make things almost look HD. I'll fix the layout (:

commenting to test my dp, since retro's profile is too good for comments, hmph.

so, how are you? xD

Continue who knew this was perfect???

oooooh plz update again!

what happened to your story???

~Millie