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Oh...
Well I learned something new then.
I apreciate the long paragraph explaining it.
And hon if you need someone to talk to...
I can't really tell anyone you know.
So it's good to vent.
I've vented to people on here.
Its good to get it off your mind and calm you a little.
(that and other means of ways to get it off... If you follow me on that subject.)
i'm sorry i'm kinda a bitch at 4 in the morning.
My mind doesnt work very well.

haha yeah? but school trips wouldnt really take you anywhere fun. Probably the generic trip to times square, maybe to the statue of liberty. But no where really 'underground.' When was the last time you went?

Hey! thanks for commenting on 'It seems so contagious...'
I had to ask, why do you hate new york so much? What bad experience did you have there? I spend like 6 months of the year in NY usually, and I think it's alright. Delaware must be better huh?

I'm sorry.
I didn't mean it like that.
I just didn't care,
gender and sex are the same thing.
I'm sorry.
*feels bad*

Dude chill it.
It was an authors note it wasn't in the chapter.
Calm it. One little thing shouldn't set you off.

Lol a vampires bite is plesureable...
Sorry if it scared the hell out of you.
*laughs*
I think you'll live.
Gender... Sex...
I don't give a shit at 3:00 in the morning.

Ahaha, it is on purpose :)
I used to get crap all the time from my composition professor for using run-ons and fragments all the time in my papers and I was just like "Yo, bro, that's just what I do." Except I never said that and I just had to learn to control myself in that class, and luckily some of my other professors didn't mind it, but that was mostly just my creative writing professor and, well, this isn't really important at all, is it? And oh, look! Clearly, it's a bit of a habit.

Well I have friends that just graduated as well, and I know they had a really stressful time too, except for like the last couple weeks of school.

And you're friend must be like a super person or something, because I really don't know how someone could do all that and still manage a social life. Because i know I would be exhausted. But then again, who know's you know?

The whole thing with the job and having time for Ryan and such, we didn't go into much detail, and there were time lapses because that part in particular weren't too relevant to the story. I mean, if you like I could go into detail, and make something up on the spot about how Brendon and Ryan did spend time together hanging out and watching movies when Brendon wasn't exhausted or doing homework, or working.

But i do think it would be reasonable to assume that he was tired a lot or always stressing about something, because he is juggling the fact that his parents kicked him out, he has a lot of school work, and he has to come up with $300 a month to help pay for things.

I don't know. I was just taking it from my life experiences, I know I had a hard time when I was working saturdays, and had A LOT of school work, which I had less time to do when it was near the end of the year. But then again, my situation is different then Brendon's so I just assumed. So I could be wrong. i don't know how the public school system works, or what smoothie hut is like. I just know that my seniors were stressing out, and I was stressed out when it came to school and having a job at the same time, and i know that i didn't have time for much else. I'm sorry if it's inaccurate, and i'm sorry if it bothers you.

I appreciate the concerns, but it's not as unrealistic and you seem to think it is.

First of all, no one said he was working 7 days a week. No place is going to hire someone Brendon's age full time anyway. The most he could probably get is about four days a week. and secondly, no smoothie place is going to be open until 11 'o clock at night. And considering he doesn't get out of school until three, he'd probably be working from about 3:30 until about 9. So that's six and a half hours. Now, I don't know about you, but I used to have a job at a resturaunt and worked for about four or five hours on weekends, and by the time I got home I was exhausted. So that,s four days a week, six and a half hours, which is $188 a week, which would get him by on rent with a little extra spending money.

Now, as for the time management thing, lets say he works on weekends, and two days out of the school days. That only leaves him three days to catch up on school work, and nearing the end of the year, and him being a senior, it's a lot of work. so, when he's not at school, he's either working or catching up on a shitload of homework, which means whatever free time he has left he'll be exhausted. That's being up and moving around for about thirteen, fourteen, sometimes fifteen hours a day. So the fact that he's exhausted and doesn't have time for Ryan isn't unrealistic. Because a lot of the free time he has is spent with Ryan. They went out on a date didnt they? It didn't end well but that's beside the point.

But thanks for the concern, and thank you for commenting and reading the story. <3

exactly my issue!

same here ... no one's updating and I'm stuck in a rut as far as writing goes

havent gone to bed before midnight since school let out last month and i'm tired of dealing with stupid boys(no offense) I'm just really board

Hey! what's up? I'm board thought you'd be fun to talk to!
~Byrd

Hello people, just letting you all know that I've rewritten my Jalex 'You're Just a Daydream Away'. It's not too different but I'll be uploading new chapters on the rewritten, not the old one, so please check that out here;
http://stories.mibba.com/read/395554/This-Four-Leaf-Clovers-All-But-Useless-Now/
thank you :)

Oh, haha. Well, I can try to put that in somewhere.
You've probably heard "ight" and "ard".
I tend to use those more than anything else. lol. I blame high school.

Thank you for the story comment on [i]Colorless Color[/i].
What does "jawn" mean? It might just be a Delaware thing. I'm from Maryland, and I haven't heard that one.

no problemo!
ahh, my birthday is november 6th, so i won't be 18 until a few months into college :(

i read your stories so i decided to creep on your page.
i used to think i was the only person in the class of 2012 that was 16. i hate being so young.

are you a junior or sophomore?

Thank u for the comment :)