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Hey there. :) Welcome to Mibba. :D
I'm Chelsea Vengeance.
I'm working on a new story, with Jackson Rathbone [Jasper Hale from the Twilight movies] and I thought I'd just put it out there to see what people think.
It's NC-17 because of smut scenes to come, so if you don't like that sort of thing, this probably isn't the story for you, but it's pretty well written if I do say so myself. (:
If you can, please read it and leave comments? I'd love any kind of criticism, good or bad. :)
http://stories.mibba.com/read/385274/Beauty-is-Only-Skin-Deep/

Hi.A new chapter of By the Light of the Moon is out.I don't think my readers were updated. :) x

Thanks for the story comment as always. Just a few words is fine. Sorry that I haven't updated Kiss Me in a while. I'll try update more soon.

Thanks for your opinion! :D And thanks for your story comment as always!

Thank you for your comment on the final (so sad) part of I Don't Care. Imma gonna miss my baby but I also can't wait to start posting the sequel so it's it a compromise I suppose.

thanks for the story comment! Thanks for your opinion too. I'll see what the majority wants and then figure things out from there. :D Thanks so much!

Thanks For the comment on You're the one for me! I'll update tomorrow :)

Yes I thought about that but I didn't really want them to know that he was watching...and I couldn't figure out a diffrent way so I just nade it like they couldn't smell him. I just wanted him to be watching her.

thanks for the comment! And all will be revealed...in time. lol. xD thats only HALF of that particular secret. and trust me, there are many more twists no one will expect. :]

Thanks for the story comment :)

also your comments are my favey as you are very constructive with them.

Thank you for my comment, I appretiate every one so much, it lets me know where i'm going wrong, or right. so yeah, thanks xo

they're just so much fun to write. (:
there should be be another one out soon. because this is just starting to get to the interesting part. there will be a lot of unexpected things happening soon. :D

Thanks so much for the comment! I pretty much love Seth...he's so much fun to write, so I'm thinking somethings gonna happen with him eventually. And good idea about E and J...I'll have to see what happens there, but comments and suggestions are always great! Thanks again!!! ;)

Aww thanks very much lovely, I've had a bad week , hence the gore, that and I have been listening to Eminem haha. Well I hope you continue to understand, my imagination sometimes gets the better of me. And I honestly do appretiate the comments xo

Oh shit, i have based my two characters on my mates haha! i meant Nick, see i knew i was confused about somethings lol
thanks i will change it now lol xxx

lol i like the fact you comment when your too tired too haha
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thanks i like the criticism it means i know what i would need to improve haha
but the chapter wont change LOL
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...as in update again? don't worry i plan on doing that pretty soon! :D

Hi!
I just really wanted to comment and thank you personally for your comments. I absolutely adore getting comments and love that you guys are so great at making me feel good.
And yeah, correct grammar is something that is very hard to find most places (mibba especially) and I'm glad I am not the only one who likes things to be well written.
hahahaha, I didn't mean for that to sound at all conceited. But yeah, thank you so much for the comments!!!