March 26th, 2009 at 06:46pm
Hello new friend ^^
You're quite welcome :)
Sometimes things read better when you read them aloud and I think you're right about your poem... Breaking out of the poem's structure doesn't always work, but I think you've tapped into something that does :)
Hehe, 'glad to join your poetry fanclub :P
Shadow Spirit,
xxx
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