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I do crap like this:

"he is ten, about to turn eleven (summer before middle school), she is eight:
one incident, they are on his front stoop, playing checkers when they hear glass breaking inside the house. he jumps up, a checker still in hand, grabs her hand and runs they run till they reach the bookstore and she keeps running up the stairs and she becomes inexplicably scared, as if it was contagious. they hide under the kitchen table and he was squeezing the checker in his hand, the crown imprinted onto his hand.

august 2002, before she is due to start middle school, ronnie moves away. he doesn't write and she doesn't see him again until the end of summer 2008, before her senior year. she is seventeen, he has just turned twenty. he tries to hit on her, comments on the shelves she is stocking, but he thinks she's looking through them. (it's Shakespeare). she is shocked to see his face, instantly recognizes him, but he doesn't know why she is so shocked. we could talk about it over coffee? "

Terrible grammar, minimal words. I plan out my entire story just like that, all the way through. I jot down ideas of dialogue too. I hope this helped...

Just out of curiosity, what is your novel going to be about?

hello!! long time no talk lol. ^_^ how are things?

yeah taking back sunday came out with a new album!:D

yeah broken wings is an amazing song! wat other bands do ya like?

mine is fully alive!^_^ urs?

Hii!!! -waves!- yupp, randomness is awesome like Oreos...yumm yumm oreos...

thank ya for the welcome^.^ im kayla

yea, i find my prof pic so very funny. XD
btw, i do listen to The Maine; they rock!!

XD

I gots no idea what your favorite color is. I just picked a random name out of the top of my head.

Nope, It's actually pretty good. I liked it anyway... It's interesting and wierd at the same time, but good^-^

yes, i really would like that! ^^ thank you!

Hello there!
I'm Liz!
I decided to randomly message you...
xD

Hello! I'm Shoniqua. Nice to meet you! ^^

Thanx so much for reading. XD Please subscribe, my edtior is currently working on the 1st part of chapter one and it should be fixed soon, but I'm not sure when exactly and if you'd like chapter two let me know if there is enough demand I'll post it.

No problem0:) LOL

No probleem :)
Thaanks, While your at it, you should comment :)

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What's up?

'Ello, love.
I'm Krys (:
How're you ? (:

Hello, Insomniatic! And welcome to the epic website, MIBBA! I am the great, majestic MacKenzie Ridgway, but you can call me: Mac, MacKY B! Mystery Mac, Mr. Mac, Mac and Cheese, or plain ol' Kenzie. I enjoy long walks when it's raining cats and dogs, kissing under the incadescent moon, and large sums of water.

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